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A Look. A Touch. A Breath. Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/12/09

Had a good chuckle!

It just struck me as very funny. Thanks for the entertainment and please continue!

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by Anonymous04/13/09

Nice beginning.

I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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by Anonymous04/13/09

Liking it

I'm liking this please write more.

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by MoogPlayer04/13/09

Great Beginning!

Can't wait to hear more

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