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Excellent!
Not a boat, but a small house. Not a dog, but tomatoes that I grow upside down brought me the friendship first, and later the love of a pretty woman much younger than myself. My life has changed completely. I feel young again! Thank you for a wonderful story that in some ways parallels in what happened to me. Keep writing, I love your style!
Damn!
Ennui changed and charged up and hurtled into mania and life's awareness. Thank you for this one.
Tail End Pete
Perfect
Thanks for this wonderful gem and the message it carried. This is a real LW story!
On a Summer's Breeze
It's Easter in nova Scotia, and I can smell snow in the air; gray, cold and muddy - and you just wrote my dream, you bastard. On this site, as anywhere else in life, I suppose, most folks shouldn't bother. You should; you write with a tender wit and compassion, your characters ring true. Thanks.
the best
Adrian, my friend, this is the best story you've ever done. Period. Happy Easter, my man.
WOW!
Thank you, Adrian for this one. I spend (waste?) a lot of time reading stories on this site that I should be spending on productive endeavors, but this ranks with the top and was certainly an excellent use of my time. Very well done.
Spring Surprise
Most excellent! I felt all of it, the sea, the boat, but mostly I felt what it was like to be with my love again. Maybe in time.
Nice work
Well written and very entertaining. Thank you author.
I adored this
Sweet, charmingly written with love and sadness and everything in between filling the air. Thank you!
The most touching stories I've read here
Thank you very much! Wonderful story.
What a story
full of many emotions and feelings. Makes you think that once in a great while something good will happen.
Great
What a wonderful story! I think you write the best stories on this site about the sea and the denizens who dwell on and in it.
Boyd
Wonderful story
I really liked this one. Very beautiful story. I'm looking forward for some more beautiful stories from you. Happy easter to the author and to my fellow readers (sorry I'm late). thanks for the beautiful story.
Excellent Story
No sex but well worth the read. Thanks for writing an awesome story.
CAN'T BEAT LIFE ON THE WATER
IT'S VERY REFRESHING TO HAVE YOUR STORY POSTED HERE. AS A LIVEABOARD FOR ALMOST 4 YEARS, I UNDERSTAND IT IS A "DO OVER" SO TO SPEAK. HELPS CLEAR THE HEAD AND SEE WHAT'S MOST IMPORTANT TO ONE SELF. MY ONLY DIFFERENCE WAS THAT I HAD A CAT. BUT SHE WAS A LOVE AND A WONDERFUL COMPANION
very nice story
Thank you
*****
Looks to be a great sunrise.
Great story.
****
Kewl! Good reading and well written. Cheers!
too sweet by half
Good writing, pleasant idyl, but more or less lacking a plot, In fact it was soo unlikely as to be a major suspension of belief. Well, bland sells, spice not so much. It's well regarded, it has a big appreciative audience, but I'm not in that audience.
Chilley
I love the way you write.
I mean you come up with such imagery in your prose, and the theater in my minds eye flickers instantly to full technicolor life...and at a 4kUHD level of detail, too!
I mean when you pen phrases like: "Scoot and I made off on our appointed rounds, we scooped the poop fantastic" I laugh both from the idiocy of it (and as a dog lover of long standing the snappy imagery of it) as well as the veritable poetry of it. My own meagre prose seems kindergartenish by comparison to your superior handling of the art.
Were you to enable star ratings, you'd get my 5, easily.
tis way good
really enjoyed, mine and I wanted to sail, cancer stopped all that, now she has gone and I raise two and wonder, what and when will happen to me
5 Plus
5 plus Stars. Just wish there was another chapter or two. Wonderful story. Thank you.
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