by lililili
Simple and sort of believable. It was good for your first time, but some tips for next time:
More details on the sex!! only about 5 lines were dedicated to the sexual deeds.
The word 'vag' is a turn-off.
The part about Zac Efron at the end wasn't very interesting, or believable.
And what does the magazine have to do with anything?
A nice bit of fun. I was a bit put off by 'vag', but more by the location; a room would have been more sensible. More description of the sex was also needed. Good effort - and if Cody was there, why not Zac!
I know who you are and unlike cody l I will do you
In the poolof your dads house and in your room at your moms
House in ohio. Wait till u read my story about u.
My name is master Dave. I will be there shortly
Do not think that I won't be there in sandusky ohio
To see you your wrong ! I want to see you in your
Pink baby girl thong and I have your myspace touchmy strawberry
If you want I can do you from the back like cody did. And I will buy
You a car right after any kind u want oxstrawberry.
My name is master Dave. I will be there shortly
Do not think that I won't be there in sandusky ohio
To see you your wrong ! I want to see you in your
Pink baby girl thong and I have your myspace touchmy strawberry
If you want I can do you from the back like cody did. And I will buy
You a car right after any kind u want oxstrawberry.
This looks like it was written by a 12 year old. So unsexy I tihnk I'll be sick. Please don't quit your day job.