All Comments on 'Yes, Sergeant Major'

by WilleZurMacht

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Memento_MoriMemento_Moriabout 15 years ago
Loved It!

You, sir, are my new hero. I went through the academy in question back in the day, and I can completely relate. A female cadet, especially in leadership roles, is such a sexy prospect! I want to hear more of this story, so keep it coming!

Kyoketsu_ShogeKyoketsu_Shogeabout 15 years ago
Pretty Good Start

Keep going, this writing style is good, and I find few mistakes. This may be in the wrong category, but who am I to judge? The story itself is great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very nice

Perhaps my favourite story on this site, definately of excellent quality. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

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