All Comments on 'Crime: Bimbomania! Ch. 05'

by ChrystalWynd

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
love the plot

nice way of getting erica back into the running, i dun wanna see chrissy win at all awesome series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
OMFG!!

You'll probably get it down to the heroine and the villainess and both of them will be at B-I-M-B-... You have to do an epilogue on what happens to the losers. Tag it onto the final story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
And this differs from a snuff story how?

You destroy their bodies, their brains and their personalities. But this is in mind control rather than non-consent or erotic horror?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
good stuff

Good stuff keep writing

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