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story is a little choppy and a little hard to read
A good story line and concept. Smooth out the dialogue and that would let the story flow better. Thanks....Rich
learn better English
your English is very poor, making the story too difficult to read
Yet another crap
Does this dude know anything about sex, or male and female orgasms, or anthing related., he just shows how pity his state is, but yes is an expert in piracy. hehehe
oh its exciting
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