All Comments on 'Rough around the Edges Ch. 01'

This story is fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are so good.

I really like where you're going with this. you always put up an interesting read!! Keep it up..

I really like where this is headed and I can't wait to see what comes next! Keep it up!

i really like the lst story and the 2nd seems to be good so far i just hope jade dumps her boyfriend before she get hot and heavy with james.keep it hot

i absolutely want more. i can't wait to see what happened

I have to disagree with one of the post, I love this story more than the first and the last line of the story seal the deal, what an hot encounter. Love/Hate relationship are always hot and steamy!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry.

oh this is going to be good lol. These 2 might cause more trouble than Scott and Katrina.....matter of fact I know they will

But what makes no sense is that Jade comes off as this very bright woman but she is an abusive relationship. I hope that she will not marry that fool. In her plan to get back at her man she is going to use James for sex...her plan seems foolish to me. She already knows that her man is still cheating on her I wouldn't be surprised that if he returns from CO with a wife because he appears to be that sleazy.

James is more than a match for Jade and because he has been duped by his ex wife who has threatened to come where he is living should be interesting. The point that I was trying to make is 2 fold, 1. James will bot be happy that Jade is trying to use him to get back at her boyfriend and 2. he did state that he was not in the market for a serious relationship so he may go along with the plan, provided that Jade tells him of the plan.

Thanks

All kinds of women end up in abusive relationships, whether it's mental or physical abuse. At least Jade knows something is wrong; it seems like it's more pressure from family that keeps her with him. But she'll wise up. ;)

Great plot and sexual tension but it seems like your writing style is a little 'rough around the edges'. The good thing is, though I found it somewhat difficult to follow, your story drew me in so much that I ignored my frustrations and kept reading. Thanks for the read.

Good enough to want more. But what is this where she thinks how good he looks in his boxers? If theres anything less sexy than boxer shorts, I can't imagine what!

Blow it all away, is there another James for me?...

Here's an example of something I hate. We have a story tagged "Interracial Love" (so good so far), but I had to read an awful lot of copy before it was established that the "Interracial Love" was between a white man and a black woman, something that is not my thing. When I got to the bit which said "her chocolate thighs", I knew it was time to press the abort button.

It just waists so much of my time

The ultimate cock block