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A good story from a very talented writer
I really liked this tale. You are truely very talented writer. Looking forward to read some more stories from you. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Another Good One
I always stop the search when I see your name. Thanks for a fine humorous tale. The good guys win with a humble smile. You could have dragged out the story for a page or two more, but for me it was just right. Please keep writing. Thanks
Decent story
The back and forth between the couple is good.
Making it longer would be good and perhaps Eddie could be a bit less blunt.
Overall a decent story.
the banter between them was funny....
an interesting story to say the least....and out of it they found love...can't be bad....
I will not rate it because as a romance story (you do know you posted it in the Romance section right?) it is fairly crap, barely worth a 1 star.
If you post it off in Mature or Erotic Coupling then it is a 4 or 5 star story.
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