Axel’s Penis... and Mom And Annika

"Bridget too?" Hilarious!

Just great, poor Count, had so much exercise.
Funny and sexy, not one of my favs but still very good

Why?

On earth do people want to ban your stories. If they don't like them, they should not read them...

Very Erotic

An excellant well written story. What grounds would they use to ban your stories? Would it be jealousy, ignorance, or piousity. Don't give up. Others of you who feel as I do, don't let this happen. Contact literotica and tell them how you feel.
Sweet Apples

No such word

In my comment I used piousity when it should been piousness. ( I think).
Sweet Apples

Great Story!!

I am enjoying all of your stories, scouries!

PS. The word is "Piety"

need a chapter about the birthday party

You need to have the group get together for another story

dont know about these people that dont like your stories

but i have enjoyed them for the past six months roughly. plan to continue to enjoy them for a while to come. i dont like a ton of sex in my reading, i prefer a good story with my sexual literature. you have done a fine job at keeping the sex classy in most of your stories even in some of the non consensual stories , example the ex-con story which to be honest id like one more sequel before you end it completely. but, if you wrote all the stories i wanted you to continue and then finish you prolly wouldnt get any actual work done whatever it is you do for money. haha

Censorship in Literotica????

What possible grounds for banning your stories? Not literary that's for sure.

2 nd part

PLease please extend this series love ur stories it would great u write next part

Do Not Ban

I have just read this story and found it entertaining and well written. I do not think that this story needs to be banned. The only reason that I could think of why it might be is the mention of an under 18 year old but the Author did not make her a focus in the story.

It was left to the end of the story on her eighteenth birthday...

Chapter 2 please!

I'm always entertained by your stories as you're among the best writing here. This story really does scream for a B-day party! Thanks for taking so much time out of your day to write for us less imaginative souls. Never quite sure where the bullshit starts or stops! This site would be a weaker venue without you and each of your stories.

amazing

it is really amazing that he has been around this long and still doesn't know how to use a good editor.

Next

I really hope that there will be another chapter in the series.

Well Written Fantasy

Your stories are always very plausible and very well written.

I'm always entertained by your stories as you're among the best here. This story really does scream for a family B-day party! Thanks for taking so much time out of your day to write for us less imaginative souls. Never quite sure where the bullshit starts or stops! This site would be a weaker venue without you and each of your stories.Keep up the good work.

Oh, hell yes!

Another fine story, different, too.

not good

i wonder how much he pays for rave reviews on subpar work? we need more HONEST comments so these writers will improve instead of pumping out more drivel.

not good????

For once stop being an asshole... Let everyone know who are... you pussy... good story not one of the better ones i read.... i still really enjoyed it... may another chapter or two??????

Anonymous criticism

Well, Anonymous 9/17/12, how many stories have YOU written, hm? No one here is likely to win the Nobel Prize for Literature, but that is not why we write. I enjoy Scouries' stories. If you do not, don't read them. But, unless you can do better, you can stop criticizing. You come off as a no talent hack who is jealous that someone else can entertain others, where you cannot.

Thought the story was great!

Don't listen to the reviews that don't enjoy your story. They are probably jealous because of their limited stories or can't develop a story with a plot. This story builds nicely and I really enjoyed it.

I used to read a lot of Time Swept romances, any possibility of a new stories with a woman who goes back in time and partners with her own ggreat-grandfather. Believe or not, I did read a story where a young woman who had been told by written history about how her great-grandmother had loved brothers and so the family split apart. The young woman was on a train that crashed and wound up 200 years in the past. She met and later married her own great-grandfather and sent her sister a note about how she hoped the family history would change. After opening up an old truck when her sister was up in the attic, looking for baby clothes, inside a trunk carefully wrapped was the picture of the missing sister and their great-grandfather. Family history did change and there was no split in the families. Just a thought.

Way To Go Bear1954

An other Great story. Thanks. Would like to have read about Bridget's birthday gift. Oh well. Loved it anyway.

Sex scenes way too rushed

I usually enjoy scouries' stories and sex scenes but the sex scenes in this story were way too rushed. They were like a couple sentences long. The one at the beginning was okay but the scenes with the sister, and mom were waaaay too short. They went right from entry into cumming immediately. After so much build up it would have been nice to have the sex described a lot more

WHAT A FUCKING PUSSY!!!

WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS GUY SUCH A FUCKING PUSSY?! HE LETS THESE WOMEN PUSH HIM AROUND LIKE HE'S SOME SORT OF PET!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO GET WITH THE FUCKING PROGRAM, BECAUSE EVERY HUMAN MALE, WHETHER THEY ARE SOFT HEARTED OR NOT, THEY ALL HAVE LIMITS IN PATIENCE!!! STICK WITH REALITY AND GIVE THIS FUCKER SOME BALLS MAN! MAKE IT TO WHERE HIS MOTHER AND SISTERS HAVE TO BEG HIM IN ORDER TO GET HIM TO WORK FOR THEM! AND WHEN THEY WENT TO THE NUDE BEACH YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE TO WHERE HE STAYED AT THE OFFICE, THUS MAKING HIS FAMILY WORRY BECAUSE HE'S WORKING TOO HARD! GODDAMN YOU ARE A FUCK UP!!!

sounded like fun but the women are all fuck slut whores

you turned him in to a fucking wimp arsed plonker.....the women are just a bunch of controlling fucking bitches and he lets them push him around...the one good bit was him fucking the doctor.....but why did you make him such a limp dicked twat......totally ruined the story by making him out to be a loser.....this would have been so funny had he been stronger willed but no just a total fucking jerk...not worth the effort of reading such pathetic tripe....

very good

Should have more detail in the sex descriptions and the brother seems to be shocked at anythig and everything said or done. Either too much suprise and shock has been written in or the brother is an idiot savante'.

a splendid story -- I liked the sex episode with Axel and the doctor scanning his penis, but fun all through!

Personal Tastes

I don't believe that a person's dislike for a particular genre should affect another's right to express it, or to enjoy it. I do, however, know for a fact, that they are free to select a category that is more agreeable to their own personal tastes.

Hilarious!!

I wish I could give this story a 10. Not enough comedy porn being written. It’s all too damn serious! Including what I write!

Great story!

Some passion...a regular chuckle...really enjoyed this!!!! Keep 'em coming!!!!

Wonderful

He is so clueless! Its just so funny. However, a little interval giving a clue as to how Mother 'ok'd' all three of them for incest would have been nice. Any story can be picked apart though, and nothing about this is insufficient. The names for the Penile Replacements are really funny. Just for future reference. Produceing a little bit smaller Penile Replacement for those ladies who want to be introduced to the world of Anal might be welcome. Some of those dildos out there can be intimidating. Especially to a young girl. Keep it up. BTW, where are you?

Cutting the story before fucking little sister is just all kinds of wrong! Argh!

Another awesome tail...or 3 or 4!

Great story keep them cumming!

Another 5 Stars

Yes, it would have been nice to visit Bridget's initiation before the story ended.

Great

Great story, i hope its continued!

Paradise Found

Absolutely amazing, no one could ever imagine the rush your story brough to my mind & body. Your writing talent is only surpassed by your incredible imagination. Please don't stop, and please continue to share your stories with us.

I would be honored if I could get on a mailing list for your future stories

Than you


Micheal at michealor55@yahoo.com

More

You should right more on this story its amazing

a wood dildo???

TOO FUNNY! get ready for law suits! they don't bend and WILL KILL dumb ASS!

To the guy who called you a dumbass... Glass dildos don't bend either so you're the one who looks stupid

You shouldn't have ended it there u should have kept going

wonderful

Love'n this. 'Fraid there'll be real trouble if Literotica is ever persuaded to take your stories down.

Dildos dilods every where

Nice to see dildo fight in comment box.
Story was nice, i loved it, want more of it, keep up the incest work

Woody

Wooden Dildo's wouldn't be a problem if they were treated and coated with a medical grade substance. Some things would be toxic and not treated properly coated it couldn't be cleaned. But it could work! This is beautiful. I love you.

Arousing

I loved this. I reall wish you could have continued it. It was very arousing to read and made masturbating/Jacking off very kinky. Thank you for the amazing and arousing writing.