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Amusing
An amusing little tale, well developed , far fetched and a good way to pass some time.
Loved it
It was a well writen story that kept my attention through out the reading.
More nauseating crap
Why don't you admit that you cannot write!
WHO GIVE A POP ABOUT THE WRITING
the stories are great and if you don't like them ,suck it.i'm a fan and wish you write more.can't get enough of your stories.i read them over and over.keep writing your great stories your way and the hell with the assholes who teach english at the whore house.thank for writing, a fan.remember some people just bitch about anything.
Whiny ass
Hated the hero. Too whiny
Hmmm...
Good luck in the contest! A8
I liked it!
Thank you for sharing this story with all of us scouries.
I don't understand why people have to bash authors and stories that they obviously shouldn't be reading in the first place! It's a story not real life so yeah stuff might get far fetched but THIS IS FICTION!! DUH!!!
I rarely take any pleasure that tells a story exactly like real life, and if we did tell all these stories like in real life the majority of our stories protagonists would be going to off to prison for a long time.
I also hope that those who are trying to kick you off literotica a) fail b) get a life c)go away or d)all of the above.
Thank you
Delightful!
And delightfully imaginative. Your too infrequent submissions never cease to amaze! And your critics surely realize their shortcomings as human beings!
So, arn't you going to finish?
Meaning we need another chapter or more, screw what the other authors say.
Predictable
Another predictable incest story but good just the same. Good luck in the contest.
For the Earth day!!
Definitely not the contest stuff. Kept us expecting for more, really. But nothing happens.
I can't help but agree...
With the person who basically said: "Screw the assholes who teach English at the whorehouse!" I'm a fan too! Jim, as far as I'm concerned, you are one of the best on this or any other site. If they ban you here, that would suck big time! I know you are always going to be on SOL, but there are thousands of good people on this site who would be poorer for their success. I hope you win too!!!
I don't know why anyone would want to ban scouries
Hey Jim; I hope that is just bullshit about banning your work,someone is just stirring shit, and that you'll be around for a long time. Hell dude you're one of the good guys.I've been a fan of your work for a long time. As for this story, I think it was on the mild side, but a cross between erotic and humor. Thanks for the story......Rich
Sweet
Loved it a lot. Nice buildup, decent plot. Wait, it's a brilliant plot. I wouldn't be surprised if it really was an issue.
Keep up the good work. :)
I must!!!!
This was humorous. And I had to help counter
that stupid 00.
Neither Lit or Erotic
Endless, boring, unrealistic talking with no real sexual content, all written with constant, distracting errors. If it's supposed to be funny, post it in the humour category.
As always
I am a faithful reader. I have read all your stories currently aviable and love every one fo them but i love this one and plan on reading it several times more. You are a wonderful writer.
Do what you do!
The other authors are just jealous because they didn't come up with the stories themselves! Keep up that good work!
Just one more
Like always you have composed another great story!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have done it again Simply amazing
Scouries, top of the line, I hope there I several more chapters to add to this one. It desrves it. Good job and to all your critics blow it out yours.
Now that was hot and hilarious
Minor point--a better name than Tiger Woody for a big yellow and black striped dildo is Big Ben. Of more concern to me is that www dot succorious sells wooden penises. “Ones that were apparently good for the environment,” you say. Oh yeah, what environment are they good for? Not for the environment between a girl’s legs I wouldn’t think. Just imagine the splinter problem! Anyway, another great story from Literotica’s favorite son and author. Good fuck in the contest!
Now that was hot and hilarious
Minor point--a better name than Tiger Woody for a big yellow and black striped dildo is Big Ben. Of more concern to me is that www dot succorious sells wooden penises. “Ones that were apparently good for the environment,” you say. Oh yeah, what environment are they good for? Not for the environment between a girl’s legs I wouldn’t think. Just imagine the splinter problem! Anyway, another great story from Literotica’s favorite son and author. Good fuck in the contest!
Great Story!!
There was a great story that you wrote. I don't know who would want to ban you from this site because you were great writer with the type of subjects you deal with. I hope you write another chapter to this story in the near future about the brother and a sister.
Dumb shit
Both the story and the author. Only an imbecile would say they like this story (especially twice).
kudos
Ive read about half the contest stories and this is the best one yet
Sorry for being an imbicile,
But I like the story. Surprised was me to find me thinking about the other stories by this author, and lo and behold, it was the very same.
It's imbecile . . .
... you fucking moron.
Nice
Wow still one of my favorite authors on here. Hope u win and hope for more chapters too :). To all your critics up yours!!!!
Hey scouries' fans!
I made a cover for this wonderful story. Go to the Story Feedback forum and "The SCOURIES reader - for both fans and serious scholars..." thread and check it out!
GOOD FUN
AN INTERESTING LITTLE TALE.. GOOD FUN
Intersting Story Left me wanting More
I'll be waiting to hear bout the Birthday Party and Axel and his virgin sister's fun together :-) very erotic and good luck in the contest :-)
BTW Stella_Omega actually makes wooden dildos so i don't think that it would hurt too much
Fun Contest Entry
You are one amazing author. Thanks for sharing your "tail".
Pretty Funny
This was prety funny. Not all that erotic or believable, but funny. It probably belongs in Humor.
Very Good
Definetly looking forward to a sequal, keep it up. Ill definetly be saving a number of your stories aswell.
LAME
not up to your usual standards but you get a 25 for turning on the computer and for still being around this long but this really sucked so bad i couldn't even finish it
liked the idea, but not the title
I really liked the idea - definitely not your everyday family fun story. However, I think it would deserve a somewhat more creative title to match the stories uniqueness.
Great Fun
Fun to read, had me laughing and horny at the same time
Keep going!
I like the plot, the build up, and the manner in which you bring each player into the action. The one thing would be to use some more description with the love scenes. Other then that small point, awesome story. I'd love to see a story about Bridget and Axel to follow this up. Just a suggestion. Keep writing my friend.
Another superior story
Your stories are always super and this one is no exception. It thought it was a wonderful tale with an unusual premise. Don't stop!
stupid
stupid if he was so upset there is no way he would go home or get involved with any of them it was so stupid i couldn't even finish the first half page you should be ashamed of yourself for posting this oiece of crap
jackedup321@yahoo.com
wow another great story and that is my real email if u have any stories u want people to read im a big reader so u can send them to me and this storie was goodi liked it sex from beining to end mabey just a lil to much but other wise another masterpiece
The guy would ...
... die with a smile on his face ! I know I would. Great story !
R
axel blows his balls up all the family twats
This is a terrific story, from a master of hot tales of family fuckers. Please ignore the dumb critics--Axel is a brilliant literary creation! A tall, good looking young guy with a good sense of humor, a nice build, a very big fat dick, and a pair of balls that just keep loading and loading! So the boy has to keep unloading them, up whatever pussy is around. Finally, there's his sister Annie's cunt and his own mother's twat, which sis and mom rush to spread for that beauty the lad's got swinging in his pants. At first, Axel, as the gentleman he is, tries to resist. But come on, they're FAMILY cunt! They're the best Axel's ever had, and his big hard prick is by far the best his mother and sister have ever had shoved up between their legs. Now it's the birthday of his kid sister Bridget, a virgin, and mother and sister Annie know what she needs for her birthday, her big brother's big hard cock to bust her little cherry. Axel can't resist that either, and from now on he'll have all three family twats to blow his overflowing balls up into. Lucky stiff.
Totally lame
and I don't like stories that supposedly involve celebrities - utter bullshit - keep the story as a fantasy
IGNORE THE DUMBASSES
ignore them! you are a genius and they are just jealous of your obviously superior storytelling. im a big fan, and hope for more greats like this one! thanks
keep doing your best
this one of my favorite stories anybody who doesn't like they shouldnt be reading them
Hey Jim, I really like your work and your imagaination. So, I'd say to you.....
Please keep writing and don't change a thing. There is nothing more erotic than family sex and love between the participants. And, I don't worry about misspellings or other errors - I surely understand what is being said, and can't turn off the fantasy to mentally complain about an author. Then the dick would go limp, and that is my gauge of the "goodness" of the story. So, far all of yours get a 5 star on my peter meter. It's when I read criticism that I develop the limp dick. I don't agree with any of them. They ought to thank authors for spending their time preparing stories for all of us and for creative imaginations that keep our dicks hard or pussies wet. To criticize writing style or content is, to me, not warranted on this site. Either read it or not depending on your preferences, but don't pan the author. I'm starting to see the same kind of comments on each story. People aren't being nice, not enjoying this great site that is made great by talented authors such as Jim who spend a lot of hours creating erotica for us to read. Why turn against the person that serves you so well. And, for the complainers, most cannot even write a few lines without mistakes. Don't people know how to use a spell check? Jim, again I thank you for your stories - I'll continue to read them all as I leave the A's and head down the alphabet.
finish the story
you shuold write about how axel takes bridgets virginity
This is a great story!!
love the eco-friendly idea; this is how urban legends start. Gets my vote.
Silky
Great Humor!
This is the most humorous erotic story I have read in some time. Good Work!
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