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by Anonymous04/15/09

exellent start

but what does she do more this time? besides the video? there were no more suggestions she should open to or start liking that she did not do before.

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by Anonymous04/15/09

stretched out a little could be better

The prior hypnotic suggestions would make a good prologue. My personal choice regarding the hypnotic language itself is that only positive suggestions are most effective. Editing out negatives lends to both the rythm and suspension of disbelief. Still, I enjoyed it and your others, too. Thanks.

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by Anonymous04/01/10

Great story!

Keep 'em coming.

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by heartwood11/19/10

More, please!

Ah, I like this one! Please, write the sequel - what does Jeff do with his beloved, now that she obeys him completely?

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