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so we decided to buy the turkey

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by UnderYourSpell04/15/09

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A really clever way of incorporating this trigger well done!

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by Curiouswife04/15/09

This was sweet

I really enjoyed the ending.

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by normal jean04/16/09

we did two....

ham and turkey ( breast)..

I love the poem Anna. As your style, I feel like, have always felt, that your poetry was written just to me, as a reader (is what I mean). Your poems feel real and personal, whereas some poetry is snobbish and lofty.

One suggestion, the last 3 lines of the cherry pie from a can, you could lose them and not lose the meaning, ya know?

xo

NJ

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