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From One Night Ch. 03

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by Anonymous04/17/09

hmmm

someone doesn't stick to their word for very long. I do hope however she acts more professional then this when she's on the job though.

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by Anonymous04/17/09

from one night

please bring other chapter quickly love this story

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by fluer04/19/09

Wow

Great update. I just wish the chapter was longer.

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by Serranoir04/21/09

Nice

Wow nice,,, very nice .. where is the rest ??

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by Anonymous05/08/09

Hot!!

This story is so hot! Please continue....

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by Anonymous06/28/09

Good...a few factual errors...

Good. A few factual errors that probably wouldn't bother someone not from Atlanta...like, the fact that Spelman is al all girls school so her friend/classmate Richard made little sense...but not bad.

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by raunchyrare08/26/09

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!

love this story, but it's been ages,and it still in my favorite, but do you plan to finish it?

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by Anonymous11/14/09

Very good

Interesting development of the story.

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