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by Epmd60704/16/09

cuddle me till home

is missing a pronoun or something.

"Steal me away among apples/
allow me to play alone/
then swaddle me in green leaves" is the good part of your poem. The rest is inelegant.

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by tazz31709/19/12

ME, MYSELF AND I

is still only 1 person, TK U MLJ LV NV

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