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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/18/09

More Please!

Come on! Was this the begining? The middle? The end? Don't leave us hanging.

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by Curiously_Looking04/18/09

Where's the rest?!

If your goal was to intrigue readers by putting a middle piece of yor story up first, you have succeeded. This was a very nice chapter and I'm very interested in reading the rest of this story.

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