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normal jeanabout 15 years agowhat a range
of subjects you write on, UYS. I loved this. Your form was awesome, the rhyme fit so well. I truly enjoyed reading this one.
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Tzaraabout 15 years agoThis is a very good poem, UYS.
Your rhythm (meter) generally is very smooth, the rhyme is true, and the content is charming. It's really quite a good example of the form, in my opinion, and I quite liked it.
Epmd607about 15 years agoI don't think I've ever read a marijuana poem
on this website, at least. The 'is' in the first stanza seems a little off. good stuff.
GuiltyPleasurealmost 15 years agolet me add.....
...my admiration for UYS. This a smoothly flowing Rubyiat and sets out a precise story neatly within the frame - no mean task.<P>
Tess
tazz317almost 12 years agoTHE UN-LAWFUL NEED FOR HEMPS
cure and lessening of aches and depression, TK U MLJ LV NV
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