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What a story
That was one of the best short stories I have ever read. I felt like I was right there with the whole cast. The writing was great. A story doesn't have to be full of sex to make it fun to read. The emotions it evoked were most fond.
Excellent read
Enjoyed it very much. I don't read on here just for the sex. The sex gets tiresome without a good story line to back it up. Yours was great.
GREAT STORY
I hope that you continue writing more stories like this one! Looking forward to reading more of your works, even if it didn't have the usual sex plots. Very good really did enjoy it
thank you
Muffinman_b
Liked it
I liked this a lot. One point -- the dialogue is a bit clunky. But that's okay, dialogue is hard to write. There was nothing wrong with it, really, just a bit stiff. But I do like a good romance a happy ending, so thanks. :)
Almost a wonderful story
Interesting concept, but the story has a little trouble in the flow. The bigger problem is that writing skills which should have been learned in (or before) high school showed to be mostly absent.
-- KK in Texas
WOW A LW story where
the husband is not some little wimp and a wife who's not a cheater. Please More like this
A true romance
This was a lovely tale. I did stumble over a couple of misspellings and a grammatical errors. Nothing to detract from the story though. This is the way a romance should work out.
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