All Comments on 'Lisa's Adventure...Ch. 1'

by MiamiCuban

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Domination?

He´s going to dominate you!!? But he needs a friend to help? Wow!! First he built himself up. And then? I liked the way you tell the story. How you bring feeling to your writing. It made me feel as if I was looking at you seeing your anticipation in your face. Wanting to be there.

jsch1947jsch1947about 5 years ago
WHERE IS THE REST??????

MORE PLEASE!!!

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