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Rayne Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/25/09

seductive seduction at its best!!!

that was hot and sweet at the same time.Keep up the good work!

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by marklion04/25/09

Another Great Chapter!!!

This story keeps eye getting better with each chapter. I like how you had Rayne seducing Gabriela. I also like the way that you had Ryane becoming Gabriela's protector. I like how you had her tell Ryane this story about her parents and Maria's visions about them. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Each chapter has gotten better.

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