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All Comments on 'The Night, The Smoke, and The Tawny Port'

by greenmountaineer

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vrosej10vrosej10about 15 years ago
Brilliant!

This is one beautiful and eloquent poem. Bravo! :-)

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
She in her kerchief, I in my cap, had just settled

good job overall. There's a grammar issue: "That stirred our bodies fluid," but I'm not a grammarian, so I'm not gonna make any suggestions.

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