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wimp?
Bill must divorce this cheating slut
You can't buy love..
But now that you've got so much money YOU SURE CAN RENT ALOT OF IT FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE (LOVE). Remember from page 1 of the story, "I promise you I will fuck up your world one way or another." Put your money where your mouth is and open up some cans of wupass on your wife and her smartass friends. Then have the best revenge, a life well lived. Tell that old lady who humiliated you, you're going to rent some consolation in the arms of some 18 year old empty headed play things and find out what she was talking about regarding all the great sex passing you two by. "Bye bye honey, remember it'll just be sex. Don't let the door hit you in the ass on the way out."
Really needs an editor
Too many mistakes to concentrate on the story line. Not much of a story in the first place. You blame her for everything without taking into consideration that she has been supporting your limp dick ass and expect her to go without sex. You should have given her the green light years ago to enjoy sex with others if you can't perform yourself. She deserve that if she is taking care of you financially.
Lighten UP folks
I do agree that you need an editor. However, I can get past the mistakes and see a great story. For those who are not "of the age" yet, you may want to pay attention. Limpness comes to ALL at some time or another. There are remedies for this and MONEY can do a great deal in this case. GO for it as revenge against the asshole and make the little wifey jealous with those 18 year olds mentioned earlier
What would I do?
To me thats fairly obvious. Afterall who could stay with someone that does that to them? I couldnt even if it was because of a health condition, I just have to much self respect.
That said seven years is a long time to go without, but honestly that was a choice she had to make. She made no choice and deeply hurt someone she was suposed to love in the process, thats not the kind of person who should be in a relationship.
Okay, first off yes get someone, anyone to look
At your story. They don't have to be an editor just someone to proof read your story. Having got that out of the way. You do have a good story going here. Despite what has been said. Your husband didn't jerk off to seeing them have sex, he didn't take any nonsense from lover boy. he didn't really take any nonsense from the wife either. So this story is unlike most of the current crop of cheating, sorry, loving wife stories. As for the accusation that he is a wimp? I don't think so. He dealt with the situation but there are circumstances to this story. One major one is the fact that they have not had sex in SEVEN years. That is a LONG time without it. So I am not condoneing what the wife did. BUT I can at least sympathize with her. With the Husband as well to a certain extent. I do believe that the wife does truly love the husband, after all would you stay married to someone for SEVEN years without sex? Unlikely. So what to do next? Well you dump the wife's doctors. There must be better pills than the one you are taking that does the job but doesn't affect your dick. Secondly you sue the ass off the the wife's company you personally sue the lover for all he is worth. You then if you wish to ruin his marriage for him. Although that should only be an option your wife allows you to do, a sort of test, if she will then she still loves you and it meant nothing to her. Lastly you get your body fixed up you get your dick back to what it was and you dress your wife how you want her to. And then you make love to her anywhere, anytime anyplace and you do NOT take no for an answer. Assumeing you will live for another 20 years the two of you should spend as much time as you can making up for the SEVEN years you both went with out sex. And of course your wife must leave her job and be your nursemaid,handmaiden and sex slave or love slave which ever you prefer. But for the rest of your lives LET her make it up to you! There is no point in leaving each other. I am not saying you won't find someone else, BUT at 64 the chances are not as great as when you were say in your 50's.
Anyway this is just my take. I am sure I will get shouted out but you asked and this is for you not anyone else. Oh it doesn't matter what anybody else says. You write the next part of the story because YOU want to.
Regards
GW
Your writing is not bad at all, it could be smooth
er. More practice and a good proofreader or editor could help. The woman in this story isnt worth keeping. As far as the compamy was concerned she is a company whore, she fucks employees at functions and other also so, it is a part of their job. She betrayed her husband on so many levels the statement she loves him has no meaning. She intentional lied to him about their marriage and her sexual bouts. She takes phone calls and lies to her husband about them. She sneaks off to public places with her lover. She lied about two months ago, when Henry made the statement it was a year ago. She disrespects him and humiliates him with the fellow employees of the company that know she is around heel slut and the husband doesnt know any better. She placed herself and thereby her husband, at financial risk, physical risk, and medical risk by her public actions. That she remained at the conference was in itself a deal breaker. She was in a open public fuck room, she fucks Henry, who else was she fucking and and how many. She lied about it being for sex only. They were carrying on a full affair. Phone calls, drinks, clothing, meetings, massages, and every other aspect she lied her big time. He needs a whole new set of medical test for AIDS and other related diseases. The millions will come out in the divorce. She needs to be divorced for adultry as soon as possible and because of her actions the house needs to be sold and receipts split. Since she is the breadwinner she needs to pay support for her husband and he needs to have his insurance paid for by her as a part of the settlement. Being separated or living alone does not take one spouse off the medical insurance, back cope out here, divorce would but even that is able to be worked out. Henry needs to be named as corespondent to the adultry divorce eityh suit for alienation of affection and the pictures need to be provided to his wife for her consideration. Lastly, the company needs to be sued for allowing their workers to act in such a manner at company functions during working hours, it is obvious all workers know of the activities and the suit would be an easy win costing her the job and getting Henry fired. An easy million or so to just go away and not sue. To end the story, after so many years nothing is the same. She obviously does not love her husband, no woman would do what she did and love her husband. Had she loved him she would have told him the problem and they together could have sorted it out, instead she acted as a person not married and broke her marriage contract ending the marriage. All that is left if the legal aspect. He when he calms down will realize he cannot love a lying betraying cheating whore and will eventually realize the woman he loved died long ago and was replaced by a self centered piece of trash. The seal (not seat) team thing was not needed. Any service person could handle that situation and almost all of us have friends that are exservice that would be happy to lend a helping hand in a situation like this. It really is a wonder that more men like Henry dont wind up robbed and beaten to death in alleyways. Of course it wouldnt hurt the whore to be worked over by a few of the wifes she had disrespected by fucking their husbands.
good story
if I stay because of money then I leave because now I have money. If I stay because I love her then get your self in gear and try one more time you have made your point she knows what will happen. Either way I would blow off some steam and make my life great. Mike from Texas
Good Story
He has to leave. It was the way she cheated that was so terrible. You said it all when husband described his feelings about the public sex. ***** Half that lottery win is wife's. He depended on her support for years. It would be bad for his peace of mind in the long term to cheat her. ***** Very good first story. Thanks.
I know...
Perhaps you can lay down your pen and never bore us all again with a story that has no place on this website. OR Since you've won the lottery you could actually hire someone who can write an erotic story. This isn't an advice column for losers "what should I do now?" Call Dear Abby.
Enjoyed The Story
Enjoyed story, the thing is the wife has no class, why did she even take her husband along, he can't trust her so I can't see this working out. If he can't get over his anger than it will kill him, he has lost what they had together anyway, trust, love and friendship, respect.For all he knows she is still fucking around. If they are not talking anyway what is the point. I'd take a month vacation by my self, hire a detective to see what she does and says and see if I could deal with it. When he gets back sit down and deciede about marriage, but explain what and why you are doing this before you leave and let her know if she still wants to fuck around you are done. Lots of things and people to keep him busy without her, never settle for a miserable life and now they are both miserable, Thanks.
No excuse is viable
I rated the story not the writing of the story, the only option he has is to go and enjoy what time he has , take up golf, go fishing but leave the cheating bitch far behind.
Very Good for a first effort.......
but I am so FUCKING sick of this ubiquitous obligatory thing where the husband catches the wife in the act and is somehow COOL ENOUGH to take out his digital camera (Do you know ANY men that carry around a digital camera) and take pictures of the wife fucking so he can have PROOF. That is pure fantasy horseshit and would never happen in real life.
BRAVO #55
Excellent ,very realistic story.Story was interesting because it reflected a horrible problem that afflicts many famillies today.The problem as ably portrayed by this author comes down to this question; can love continue for a couple when there can be no physical intimacy?The answer to this question,probably,must be answered individually by the couples experiencing these tragic circumstances.The author says as much when he asks for reader thoughts on the subject.The author is right on the money with his portrayal of the evil,venal character,Henry.Such men who seek to profit from the misery of others are ,unfortunately,all too common.The only negative the author allowed was the husband's winning of the lottery.This can be excused as poetic license as the author gave in to his romantic side to find some type of happy ending.Romantic but not realistic!Ritterburg#55.
Great start...
There has to me more to this story. I carry a digital camera with me all the time...after what the 1st wife did to my and my kids. If I were him, I'd take the money and leave...after doing some damage to the loverboy.
John P
Great start...
There has to me more to this story. I carry a digital camera with me all the time...after what the 1st wife did to my and my kids. If I were him, I'd take the money and leave...after doing some damage to the loverboy.
John P
Here's a solution
Now that you have money, its time for a change. Get your equipment modified, get a full check up, take advice & act accordingly. After you are all modified & charged up, contact some gangsters & get that Henry guy killed. Of course! your wife will be sad that her lover boy is dead so throw a BIG party. DON'T leave your wife. Stay with her. Now that you have money, Hire some models or HOT girls to spend night with you. If you can perform GOOD if not then fake it, I mean invite the girls in 'your room' let them scream an orgams. Make your wife jealous, hurt her, make her realise how it feels being rejected. As your wife comes in your room only for your laundry, keep panties of the girls as a proof & let her see it. You are married for 30 years, its a long run. Many people will give you tons of advice, but you are the one to make the last call. I'm looking forward for the next chapter(s). Very interesting story.
I dont get it... WHAT is the ISSUE?
This sounds like a forced reconciliation at all costs story. The premise is that he cant leave the wife because of Medical coverage for HIS heart condtion. Now that he has won $12 Million ... what is the issue?
what is the UNCERTAINTY? Given what the wife did and has done nothing but lie betryay and decieve him... and never apologized... why would he NOT divorce her?
hello Mcfly?
The story is fairly well done and the Husband's medical issue is a New and interesting angle since it is one of the reason WHY she cheated and appears to be why he cannot divorce her.
the lack of sex for the wife was/ is a REAL isue.... but it does NOT justify the wife's serial cheating and her public humilation of her husband which seems to have been going on for over year... maybe several.
IF the wife felt the lack of sex was justification for stepping out she should have talked to him about it first.
The fact that she did it behind his back PROVES she knew it was wrong.
I sure hope the author does NOT force a reconciliation.
Good Start!
Your writing skills are good and you should continue. It would help if someone else gave it a quick read-through though, just to catch the big things. I can't say this guy is a wimp since he took action quickly and kicked Henry's nuts. I would like it if you were to add an epilogue letting us know if they were able to get past her slutty behavior with Henry. Thanks for the good read.
A difficult choice!
First f all,thank you for a fine story. 30 years is a long time to be together(over 50 for me).It would destroy me to walk out and hurt to stay.Perhaps he can use some of the money for doctors to help him(viagra?).In any case I look forward to the next chapter.
The guy talks too much
Most hard-core ex-military don't give long talks such as the one delivered to Henry. When William got into the suite, there were several couples there, not just Henry and Jenny. No one noticed him? Whatever you decide to have William do, his marriage is already over.
A Toughie
William has some legitimate issues. Even if Jenny felt justified in "just having sex" with someone she chose a coworker and did it in front of other coworkers. Really, really bad. About as disrespectful as you could get. He feels, legitimately, humiliated. The affair has gone on for some time and from what he saw was more than the "just sex" she claimed.
On the other hand when Henry was disrespectful she came down on him right away. Did she compartmentalize what she did, only away from home, as owed her?
From her reaction she still loves William. From his he still loves her. Can he get over the hurt? People have in the past. It is late for both of them to start over.
Having the money now is a nice touch. I would like to see how this turns out. Do get an editor.
Thanks for sharing.
I don't know...
I think this story is close but no cigar,,,,, try to revisit and shape it up (so to speak)...
More of an outline than a story
Rushed, poorly written, and generally more of a story sketch than a story.I know I'm anal about proper writing, and tough titties to those who object; but the line "...would have drank myself into the hospital" just killed it for me.Yeah, use an editor. This might have been something if you could actually write properly.
I have a couple of problems.
While the story has potential I have a couple of problems with a couple of core issues to the story. First if he was a retired Seal team Comdr he did so with a pretty good annual pension and full VA benefits. He therefore wouldnt have been broke or without medical coverage for his health problems. That washs the stories reasons for him staying with her except love. If he cant get it up for 7 years and she has a high sex drive why havent they been talking about this as a problem. Seems they both betrayed each other. Her with sex and him denial. Maybe the love isnt as strong as they are claiming anymore and its time both start over, possibly with each other but likely with someone else.
dumb
dumb story told by an idiot,read it yourself and if you think it's a good story.Anyway what she done is unforgiveable she lied,she planned it,she done it in front of all her frieds rubbing his face in it,she no more loves him then you would a pet.I UNDERSTAND HIS ATTACHMENT BUT SHE HAS NONE TO HIM.The best thing for him is to get rid of her now before she causes his health to really go down hill.
dumb
dumb story told by an idiot,read it yourself and if you think it's a good story.Anyway what she done is unforgiveable she lied,she planned it,she done it in front of all her frieds rubbing his face in it,she no more loves him then you would a pet.I UNDERSTAND HIS ATTACHMENT BUT SHE HAS NONE TO HIM.The best thing for him is to get rid of her now before she causes his health to really go down hill.
Good first story
Writing is good, need to work on character development to bring out a complete story. Thanks for sharing. Like to see more!
good firt story writing
This, your first story, is good but is incomplete as it stands. You do have redundancies in stating your case about whether to stay with her or leave her after her infidelity: how you would miss her, that she didn't say that she was sorry about her cheating, and you needed her medical insurance, etc ...... The story line is very good and the ending quite surprising. But -now- what happens? Continue your story and include your son and grandson. Also, I know that medications for certain aliments have improved nowadays to stages in which there are less serious side effects. I don't know about heart conditions but suspect that this holds true in those cases in which a man's libido decreases. Heck, if his sexual drive where to improve sufficiently, he could keep his "semi-loving wife" and also find a young girl friend! He could have the 2 women compete for his attention. But seriously,do continue your story. RAG
lol
toos the bitch out....tell her you cant get over what you saw and her disrespect and hit the pavement...take your 6 million and find another wife or companion paid or otherwise that will be totally devoted to you...jenny is 60 and youre 64 which is not that old for a man but at 60 what will she find...another old guy who may start out healthy or like you have medical problems .....you thou get off the drinking and find a new companion as even as long as you have been together and yes she is your childrens motherfind someone you can trust again....do you really think you can trust her ever again after this and as you said all her co workers know what was happening and said nothing.....id use the pics and still take down arrogant henry also as he needs to be taught some humilitation just as you were ...it may help him in the long run...if you want sue the company and add to the millions you already have as what they were doing is now against most company policy...my opinion lol but you asked get a younger prettier companion and learn to trust again ....it may be a divorcee or at your age a widower but im sure a 64 year old millionaire can find a nicely perserved 40 to 50 year old just dying to be with a man like you.
Feel sorry for all the wimps...
or rather those who call anyone who doesn't go postal a wimp. I suspect their wives cheated on them and left them for a real man, and they try to pretend they're men by blowing up at any story that doesn't do what they didn't have the guts to do. Sorry for the rant, but they're sooooo tiresome.
You do need to get a good editor, not just for the small mistake (typos that spell won't catch, (seat for seal for example) but also to help you with the logic of the story. It will still be your story, but all writers need someone to use as a sounding board.
In this case the whole Seal thing is so overused, especially when you aren't going to use the training. Ex military would be normal for anyone that age and it would be enough. It makes the point that he's had some training and isn't a physical coward. It would also be better if he made his own threats rather than "I'll get my seals to do it for me." That's what someone who is afraid. Mr. Colt will equalize folks not in good health too.
You could also make it clear that he didn't retire from the service, and without injury he wouldn't have VA coverage (family income would probably be too high based on the story.)
Having said all that, you've made some interesting characters and a very interesting situation. I do hope you'll continue the story, I don't think a first story should be open ended. Let us see how your mind works as you figure out a solution for your characters.
I also think we need to see a bit more of the wife's thinking. I believe she had fully justified what she was doing in her mind. Having done that, she's going to be slow to understand the magnitude of her betrayal. Thus she doesn't say she's sorry for cheating. I don't think that he should just walk away, folks who've been married that long have a lot of tools to deal with problems, and you don't show those in play.
Then there is the money. That hasn't been handled well. There are all sort of problems with "giving" it to his son... not the least are gift tax problems. Then there is the whole moral aspect of cheating her. If he's going to take the high road, he can't do that. I'd like to see him wrestle with all of that in the next chapter. He also needs to work on the his perception that he is no longer an equal partner in the marriage. He has issues in depending on his wife for support, and I suspect that has caused her problems too. I doubt she minds working, but having her husband now take a more subordinate role would be a strain and probably another reason for her affair. Most women don't cheat just for sex. However, if her husband was acting like less of a man due to his dependence, it would be hard for her not to see him as less of a man, and that could lead to an affair with someone who she sees as confident and powerful. That is acting in a way her husband no longer acts.
Yes, you've got the elements of a good long story. Don't rush the time period and avoid the trap of a quick fix (like a death bed scene--- it's fine to use his health as part of the story and a reason for movement, just don't make it dramatic.) Show us how the characters grow and change as a result of this. Finally, you do need to have a happy ending. It doesn't have to be a reconciliation, but in hard times we don't want to read tragedy for fun. Good Luck
...Talk some more with her then leave
I think this was written ok, with no editor it survives better than the grammar by some of the posters below. I like the plot line, and I can imagine his pain. There are some misses like the Seal pension and full medical care, but an editor would have caught that. In general this is not some fantasy (cuck or otherwise) or jerk off material.
The main character's problem is that he is not moving on, too long in the feeling sorry phase. He needs to get better answers from the wife, then cut her loose and see whats out there in the world. SEALS don't quit. I can see her being a full flushed out character and potentially coming back into his life after he refinds his self esteem.
This whole issue actually deals with why I read and like stories about cheating wives. I do not understand what would let a long term spouse think its ok to toss away their life mate, someone they have grown together with, for some sexual romp. So I would like to see him work on answering those questions.
Good story,,,,but
I thought your story was "good" some more character developement for the wife would be good. There were some errors in spelling and grammer.
The are medical procedures for men with performance problems beyond viagra and the like, there are prosthisis available to be grafted into the penis that will enable an erection so that the man can perform normally.
As to the story line in this article as well as most of the ones I have read is that the characters do not act as real people would. When William over heard his wife making a date over the phone with "someone" and later caught her in the lie. A real person would have challenged her right then, demanding to know then, why she lied and why she had made a date with "someone".
As to the incident at the party where William caught his wife with Henry, while almost no one carries a digital camera, most do carry cell phones that are digital cameras
so I see no problem there except to refine the story a bit.
However I do have a problem with him just taking the pictures and then leaving. Why not have William walk over to his wife and Henry, hand Henry $5.00, tell him to go get a "good fuck" turn, face his wife, spit on the floor and walk away.
Also, in these stories the wife says something to the effect that she "will do anything" to make it up to the husband. Just what does she plan to do to make it up? Lets see her make some real plans to "make the husband whole" as they say in legal documents. What does she plan to do, kill the other guy, go to management and make a sexulal harrassment complaint?
As to what does William do now? What does he want? If he could wave a magic wand and create the best situation possible, what would that be? figure that out and work to make it happen.
As to William being an ex-SEAL COME ON! Been done to death, and anyway most real people are not ex-SEALs.
Also, lets see, as Paul Harvey would say "the rest of the story."
Great story
Great story. Heartbreaking but beautifully written.
60 year old George
If only
That's all I am waiting for, an income that will allow me leave a sexless marriage. No cheating, but no sex either. They say money can't buy happiness. Hah, it would sure buy the opportunity to find out.
I like this
Story as it is subtly different from many of the others on this site.What to do next? my idea is kick her out of the house,then first flight(one way)to Antigua see local realty agents,buy new house and get private health care.By the way he was not a Navy Seal to finish when he retired,he was the leader of a Navy Seat team.Looking forward to future chapters.
WHAT WOULD I DO?
The only thing I would have done differently is to sue the company. I would make everyone's spouses aware that the company meetings were being used as a sex orgy. I would get everyone fired including the whore wife. She said over and over how much she loved him but no wife that loves her husband will act like that. In spite of the fact that i had won the lottery I would still do this to get even. The recent hijackings sends a message to all. DON'T FUCK WITH THE SEALS EVEN OLD EX SEALS AND ONE WITH A HEART CONDITION. Good job, Hope to read more like this. NYMINUS@YAHOO.COM
terrific
Heartbreaking story. Your characters are real, and the situation totally believeable. The wife's emotions built to a boiling point, and not having planned it out she acts in ways that would inevitably lead to her destruction. They still feel deeply for each other, but she is able to segregate this part of her while he is not, and that is totally believeable. What to do next? There needs to be the confrontation...can she stop? will he destroy everyone he can legally, and will she be will to help him? How would they handle the future if it came to that? They both have issues for the future, and that's where you can have fun with this thread you've started...best of luck with it!
Have to leave her
I once heard it said, that even an old tiger is still a tiger, and comes with all the danger of any tiger. I'm afraid in spite of her protests she did severely disrespect him and as much as a Seal has to have trust in his team, her ass is out the door............Oh, excellent for a first timer!
Well, since you asked.
Give the old fucker some huevos. As it stands right now, he has been pretty pathetic. The women has shown him some serious disrespect and he has had to endure it because of financial resons. I wouldn't mind old Henry getting his ass kicked too.
Thanks for writing.
well
you ask questions! first never been married 30 years. second yes I had a cheating girlfriend. so for me whatever bond you had in this story. it's gone. the reasons are: the normaly so communicative woman has not even tried to talk about her problem. she just started cheating. her timeframe of two month? is questionable. she worries about his health? not really bareback fucking might give him more sickness than he already has. at the age of 60 the sexdrive is for sure not that strong anymore that she gets out of control. so she could if she really cared for him at least not fuck around so openly. does she love him ? I guess maybe a long time ago. now he is only a quiet harbour to come back and not be alone. if I would be taking meds so I have no sexdrive anymore I would be gone that minute. playing golf and whatever else and meeting a lest kind and honest people would be more loving that what I had received before. and maybe there would still be an elderly lady who wants to snuggle up and warm my bed. and if I could not forget well drinking myself to death in a bar is for sure a lot funnier than all alone at home. so weather I would have money or not. fuck her and whatever lies she told me over the last 30 years. the only thing why I did not gave you more points is the sadness of the story and the lack of erotic.
well, indeed
yea, well i say leave her and its not because of the money although that helps,its because of her actions. like the other guy, ive never been married but i know a thing or two about cheating and what possibly makes this worse is that they've been married for over 30 yrs and despite the lack of sex or at least penetration, seem to be great together. im glad you didnt have him acting like an idiot, he should have confronted her like he did and the kick in the balls was a nice touch, except i might have kicked him when he was down too. yes, the love and time and friendship are big factors here, but he nailed it when you pointed out how sorry he got hurt not how sorry she cheated. shes not sorry and will most likely if they stay together pick up on her affair when she thinks its blown over. i know this is just a story, but more often than not, the affair is with a friend or co worker although she could have done better than that douche and rubbing it in her husbands face. i mean, how arrogant of her to assume she could introduce her lover to her husband, and then have her other coworkers/friends not give it away? also, for a first timer without an editor, you did a great job. i would love if you wrote a second chapter.
Well, my brother...
I am so grateful my wife took a different path with my medical problems. In your story senario I would have not needed the lottery. A law suit would have fattened my wallet enough for the freedom and would have provide a longer lasting satisfaction in dealing with the man willing to cheat.
An editor, yes.
The glaring hole in your plot is the one you cut into it: everyone in the company knew his wife was sleeping with another member of the company: as someone said, who needs a lottery: the lawsuit could include medical for life; a very healthy lifetime anuity, payment of his divorce costs, and even therapy and counseling for him and then you can throw in the lottery win AFTER he divorces her so he can keep it all. Cheating spouses when caught feel guilty and say they love their spouse: do a little research and you discover that only about 12% of these relationships can survive long term after the kind of cheating this wife is guilty of. Divorce her, get a life. Try dating. Also get a better doctor: it sounds like diabetes and blood pressure meds and this can be adjusted with the addition of a little blue or green, or other pill to aid in rejuvenating his sex life. She should have divorce him if sex was more important than her love for him. As he pointed out, her cheating was public within the company and went on for at least a year and then she has the "balls" to do it while he is with her. I surprised he did not at least slap her, after kicking him.
I really cant believe some of the comments on this
The woman is total trash. Out and out a company whore, one of many publically known. And people here are talking of reconciliation? My god folks get a life. I am sure after the divorce a sixty year old whore can find a guy in his 80s that would marry her, great. And our wimpish hero at 65 could easily acquire a younger woman of 45 to 50 or so to live in with him, especially if he had money. Sorry young ones at 65 your life isnt washed up. Most people at 65 have the money needed to acquire what are called trophy wives, younger, sexier, slicker. The pc term for this is recycle, recycle the old slut, and find you a younger slut that will service you when you want how you want. Dont think of it as divorce think of it as recycling the older model for a newer classier model.
I really cant believe some of the comments on this
The woman is total trash. Out and out a company whore, one of many publically known. And people here are talking of reconciliation? My god folks get a life. I am sure after the divorce a sixty year old whore can find a guy in his 80s that would marry her, great. And our wimpish hero at 65 could easily acquire a younger woman of 45 to 50 or so to live in with him, especially if he had money. Sorry young ones at 65 your life isnt washed up. Most people at 65 have the money needed to acquire what are called trophy wives, younger, sexier, slicker. The pc term for this is recycle, recycle the old slut, and find you a younger slut that will service you when you want how you want. Dont think of it as divorce think of it as recycling the older model for a newer classier model.
Compelling
Liked the story. It depicts the emotional damage that an affair can cause. The wife's character is perhaps not drawn as sharply as possible. William's character comes through nicely; and I'm pleased you did not feel the need to have recourse to gratuitous depictions of sex. As for grammar, only two jabs: (1) the past participle of to drink is "drunk," so "Things would have remained the same and I probably would have drank myself into the hospital -- is, as someone else pointed out, in error. (2) The objective case of the pronoun "who" is "whom." You wrote: without regard to who it may hurt. --which does truly hurt a reader's eye. All things considered, I'd say you are off to a very good start.
Leave - take the money & find someone to cherish
Because the stupid slut that you married is not worth $12 or $12 million. Dump the slut and get on with life! Yep, it is bad you found out about her infidelity but to suffer in the same house, same slut, same channel with a decent chunk of change is absolutely stupid! No doubt, there is some lonely good looking older women who would sincerely appreciate this male character's integrity & disposition regardless of the money status. Better yet, for a good price - make her disappear and enjoy life or what is left of it. Good story author but you failed to detail the any reasonable revenge or retribution for this failed slut wife - thus the less than perfect score.
Please continue
I see a lot of possibility in the storyline. I think he should shake up her confidence in him, just as his confidence in her was shaken up. Since he was made a public ridicule by the open and arrogant affair of his wife, he should do something to belittle her in front of their close friends. Heck, if you do not wish to write a sequel please allow me to try. I am a very poor writer but I sure would like to give it a try.
Who are these idiots...
that claim the wife REALLY loves the husband? If she loved him so much she would have got herself a dildo or him some medical help. Not getting laid by a coworker in front of other coworkers. SHE FEELS SOMETHING FOR WILLIAM BUT IT AIN'T LOVE. This is actually a no brainer, but sure author, go ahead and make William a wimp and let him stay with the adultress. She told William "IT" just happened (between the guy and her). Hello idiot commentators (condoning recociliation) but "IT" IS WHAT ADULTERY IS: "IT" HAPPENING. If not then what is IT other than DOING IT. William needs to take his windfall and buy 1)some erection creme and 2)an 18 year old bikini model to apply it for him.
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