All Comments on 'Ballad of Captain Hook'

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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years agoAuthor
good lord girl have you no shame

bwahh

normal jeannormal jeanabout 15 years ago
it pains me

to see you leave a double naught on your own work. I personally love ballads and found myself attempting a tune with this one.

I thought this was very creative and I do not recall you having written a ballad before now, so congrats! You could tweak it a teeny bit, but what struck me was your empathy for cold blooded killers and thieves.

Thank youfor sharing your soul :)

AngelineAngelineabout 15 years ago
Hey, I gave it a 75

and the reason why is the phrase "black candle curls," which is perfect. The rest, uh not so much. I know you can write a totally kick ass poem on this subject should you a) choose and b) not be constrained by Survivor. So get your points and don't sweat it.:-)

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHEN SEARCHING THE FRACTURED TALES

peter pan isnt. TK U MLJ LV NV

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