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good lord girl have you no shame
bwahh
it pains me
to see you leave a double naught on your own work. I personally love ballads and found myself attempting a tune with this one.
I thought this was very creative and I do not recall you having written a ballad before now, so congrats! You could tweak it a teeny bit, but what struck me was your empathy for cold blooded killers and thieves.
Thank youfor sharing your soul :)
Hey, I gave it a 75
and the reason why is the phrase "black candle curls," which is perfect. The rest, uh not so much. I know you can write a totally kick ass poem on this subject should you a) choose and b) not be constrained by Survivor. So get your points and don't sweat it.:-)
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peter pan isnt. TK U MLJ LV NV
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