All Comments on 'Comfort Blanket'

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sdbnncsdbnncalmost 15 years ago
Exactly right!

I have been in exactly this situation as a submissive -- my concept of who and what I am at war with what I must become to fully serve and submit to my Master. One of the best aspects of this story is that it perfectly captures the best part of submission AND Dominance -- the Dominant does not have to require or demand or insist. A true Dominant controls by inspiring the submissive to more fully and completely submit, to value the desires of the Dominant above her own pride and concept of self outside submission. Thanks for a wonderful telling of the experience!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
deep and powerful

Well-written, intensely erotic, and powerful. You just get better.

But just a tiny wee technical point: there's a bit of confusion of tenses in places. A tighter edit would easily sort that!

Thank you.

sirsemegasirsemegaalmost 15 years ago
Very moving

Enjoyed this so much. What makes them submit? What makes them tick? The steps that are taken are small. You see? That wasn't so bad. Soon they are farther along than they ever thought possible. Very proud moments, makes them feel very cherished and proud themselves.

ContrastingContrastingalmost 7 years ago
Inside the Perfect Pet

It's curious to think about why the woman submits, what it's like and how she arrives at this point or that point in her submission. This traces the path, connects some of those dots, let's us see and understand the increments that bring you to that luscious place where obedience and submission are all that matters and all else is just details. Very well written, a strong sure voice and prose to be proud of. Were I that man to you, I'd say "good girl" and yes, "I am proud". If and when, he'd say it and until then, let me. This is very good work and very instructive. -C

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51 year old married submissive woman living in Tasmania, Australia. BDSM and Ds are what float my sexual boat. I spent years on the kink scene in the UK, both privately and publicly (even to the extent of being a demo bunny :)) before we moved to Australia. So I have plenty ...