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Good Chapter NYC
Thanks the first chapter left me wanting to find out more about the characters that u wrote about I look forward to reading the next one.
WOW
TOTALLY LOVED IT CANNOT WAIT FOR SOME MORE
:)
I can't wait until the best friend finds out that she is pregnant. Wow, I can tell this is the beginning of a great story. Update soon.
Fine
Set start. Runs and darts
Save time
If you like Military Comics read on. If you find this erotic at any of 12 parts, please get help.
Boring.. boring.. boring...
No build up. Nothing. Empty.
I'm not even bothering with the rest...
There is something to be said...
for short and to the point lol. Got me hooked immediately!
Good so far....
the line about the two "wanna be" body builders took off in Opposite...
but otherwise pretty good.
hahaha
Love it, just what i was looking for .. lots of intrigue!
Great Start
As I read through stories I seem to notice that there are 2 types of stories. Sex Stories and then real sex stories. Your story creates a background and for most people it is better if not necessary to understand the story. For me this is great start and I can not wait to read more. :)
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