Marrying You was a Mistake

Nice story

I would like to see a sequel where you have Sgt. Evans meet a woman that treats him, like he wants.

I LOVE A Happy ENDING!

Great story, well written. I enjoyed the hell out of it!

Fuckin' A right!

Dump that skanky 'ho on her ass. Only one life to live and spending it like this ain't the way to go. Isn't it a bitch when life gets in the way of what you want?
Tail End Pete

Very well done.

I WAS starting to feel sorry for misty up untill the husbands friends pointed out that the wife was seen dancing and going home with the ex high school friend. After that it was just a matter of time. Well written story.

Yes

Simple little story, nicely written

wow... exceptionally strong man

That was just fabulous. The husband built his case slowly and steadily. First it was the wife's inability to keep a promise made that morning in one of those Marriage moments.

Her rejection of him touching her as a nornal husband wife does in public. But she could touch him or grab onto his arm.

and finally the cheating. The way the husband set this she could says ..."I was just lonely"... (and did in fact say that) but by this point in the story her cheating was a manifestation of a dead marriage.

From the fifties when I was at basic, dear john

letters could destroy a man and it did several. This woman is basically a total slut. She should not have married. He is lucky he has friends that kept track of her and very lucky he could walk away from a slut with so little feeling or emotion. A shame Mike was able to walk but eventually I will assume some unknown frieds will damage his ability to motivate. The slut wife needed to have more than an arrest for being caught with the wrong man, she needed some physical damage also, but some men are above that. He was a sgt a few of his men that respected him would have done that without him even knowing. There are really two types of women out there. Those that are wives and meant to be wives, and those that are sluts and never meant to marry. Only a mature man can tell the difference.

Yes

Correct response.

So So

Story was flat and unemotional.

ok

can't blame him as she cheated before he came back. on the other hand war for sure changes everybody. and this black and white judgement system does not work out in live. if you believe that you will be alone the rest of your life. his game was mean as far as he never gave her a chance at all. If he would have been honest he would have served her the divorcepapers the first day he came back. without playing a mean game she already has lost. this story has a stale aftertaste of a man who is reduced to himself. nobody will be able to do ok by his side.

Sequel

I agrre. The Sargent needs a sequel where he finds what he needs and Misty gets to see it.

Part of the learning process for males . . .

is finding out what lil gurls are made of in reality. This guys wifey showed what ALL fems are made of and yeah, he made a mistake marrying at all, not just her. If he's smart he'll never legally marry another for they're all alike when it comes to cheating, either intellectually, emotionally and/or physically. I've come to believe the 3 stages all fems go through as defined by newer fem shrinks, 1. sex - 2. 'in love' and 3. 'attachment'. 3 has the meaning of him providing her with safety, security and stability for her personally. She can be attached to one man whilst simultaneously having sex with another and actually 'in love' with another. THAT is what lil gurls are made of.

Enjoyed It

Do believe the boyfriend would have paid a much bigger price for being involved in my marriage but thats just me. It's never happened so I really don't know how I would handle it. Thanks for the story.

I liked it and disagree with Anon's comments =)

Anon said that he was mean because he didn't just walk right then and there instead of making her go through this mean pretense. But I disagree. He gave her a chance. When she first said marrying him was a mistake, he could have done it then, but he asked her, trying to make her see, she was living for herself, while expecting him to make her happy, and not living to make him happy if she wanted him to make her happy

The basic thing I got was that she didn't see the forest for the trees, she was cheating on him while he was away. She wanted a deal where only he changed and she didn't have to give up anything. They made a deal, where he was going to try to meet her halfway, and she never even tried to meet him there. And he realized she wasn't going to try when she started lying and refused to come clean no matter what. And he finally realized that she wasn't going to change. So he walked. And it makes more sense when the next night she's out with her new guy she was cheating on him with.

What she did was far more mean and cruel then he did trying to give her a chance to prove she wanted to stay married to him. If you can't see that I wonder about your standards. She (or any person) can screw someone over, but by god he's better take the high road, no matter what she does? How does that comment differ from what the wife was doing to the husband in the story? (^_^)

-Risq

Lovd it and the bitch got what she wanted

You're better off w/o her believe me. I know the botch I was with cheated while i was gone 8 months and when I got home she wasn't there. She came running up the drive way and I said fuck it. I'm happy as hell I didn't fall for her BS and married her, it would have not worked out death for a bunch of people including me I'm sure

Blah story

Not a bad story, But not one of this authors's best. It was pretty flat and unemotional as one of your readers said. I hate to criticize Scorpio44A who normally writes a fine story, but this story was kind of blah.
the Ct. Yankee

Good Story

His lack of emotion must have bothered many of us, but after going through combat situations he has learned to keep his cool so he can have a future. Her going out with Mike the following night proves that her first statement was completely correct!
The other aspect that is interesting is that the situation they found themselves disconnects people. He really could not allow himself to be distracted when he was out there. And living alone has away of causing people to only pay attention to their wants and dislikes.
Excellent work!

Most of your stories...

are good, all things considered.This one was pathetic.She should have kneed him in the balls at dinner for the way he dealt with their relationship.(It's irrelevant that her particular "infraction" was adultery-they had a marriage,not an operation command)-Plus the author adds that in after the fact to make his actions seem justified,to say "I told you so" to readers -for whatever reason,pityful ploy.Pistolpackinpete

Interesting but Scary

I agree with both Risq and Harry (that is the scary part). This was a well written story and a credible albeit non-erotic plot. Seems like we get 25 cream-pie-eating-wanna-be-wimp-watch-wife-getting-s crewed stories for every story about a non-wimp husband now on lit. Thank you S44.

WOW

EXCELLENT story. One of our fighting men telling it like it is!
Thanks for the good read...

good reason for women to avoid military assholes

Maybe this jerk ought to be screwing his men... he definitely doesn't want a wife and partner.

I'm surprised by the comments here..

you certainly made the guy come across like an immature asshole. he plays this entire game about showing his wife she promised to change.. but didn't... problem is you completely skipped over the fact that he also lied, and didn't change. he promised to me more caring more loving, instead he walks out and leaves her alone all day. hypocrite. that said, the underlining story of her cheating on him just makes the entire game silly. nothing fit together at all... it almost comes across like you developed your story on the fly.

Brief - Terse - Pointed - Fair

It is your style and there is nothing misunderstood if one understands life and reality and commitment.

The other dips here voting lower can't keep promises either. A promise starts when you make it - and especially when you say your vows in marriage.

Puzzling how some people interpret to their own want.

Nice work Author. You are appreciated

With High Regard

I'll Bet

I'll bet incidents like this is one reason why so many guys are taking their own lives when they get back, change that one reason to primary reason.

Whoa - that is a great story [short & justified]

Well done, author. Liked the style and approach. Sure, it has "unanswered questions" but perfect delivery on the manner in which the main male character dismissed this slut ex-wife. Bravo! Keep them coming just like this one and maybe even take a crack at developing an ending for JPB's Carmyn's Baby screwed up story.

why didn't the buds keep Misty in there lives?

Hey Hero! Not much in the way of erotica. But it does have the feel of gangbang of 7 on 1 unwilling individual. I guess that is the erotica.

Now before you tell me to F off let me add my 2 cents Mr. Representitive of America's finest.

You go off to war and have your troop to think of, to take care of and in return they to take care of you. Yet at home long forgetten your wife whom you promised to Love and Protect has no one to be apart of her life or take care of her while your gone.
Why didn't Jose, Miguel and Tony and their wifes make Misty apart of their lives and she apart of their lives. Not as it turned out they looked at Misty from afar and took notes. Why didn't they nudge Misty to remember they are apart of her life and has such her indescretion is not acceptable before it happened.

It seems screwy that before you left to go off and play army you didn't make arrangements for you and Misty to be apart of the lives of Jose, Miguel and Tony and their wifes. And they to be apart of both your's and Misty's life.
Or You're the Hero and heros don't think that way. I guess just because you are apart of the big 6 and your wife is not - that is ok. Come on! You feel stress - She feels the stress with you half way around the world. You have your troop to lean on and your wife? With the stress's of your being gone and her being alone with no help near by - Dude You Set Her Up To Fail. Cheer our Glorious Hero!

To all the haters

To all the haters I for one think that he is dead on with this story. Being a veteran myself and coming back from a six month deployment to find out that " I don't love you anymore." Scorpio never said that the man didn't leave numbers or names or points of contact for support and help and as with most military people they have pre-deployment briefs for the families and offer support and people to call and such. So for all you bashers out there get a clue and a life he may or may not have set her up but he did set himself up to cover his ass so he didn't get the short end of the stick from when his "poor ganged up on wife would have left him out to dry and not given two shits less about how he felt or what he went through. Scorpio keep up the good work no matter what the haters say.

Wonderful!!

Nothing much to say but wonderful!

The story has been revised.

I read the comments and you were right, it needed some changes! The revised story is now the one posted. Enjoy! Thanks for the feedback. I like the story better now.

no way jose ?

she was caught and paid the price - and for misty no time for that sargent

There was a time

when no divorce could be granted while the husband was deployed, I know it can't stop a cheater from cheating but that way they can't legally take every thing & run while the victim can't defend themselves.

no cuckold like it the cheating bitch . hes at war and shes fucking around the slut

there is a difference

cheating or not..a promise is a promise.
The first one you make is to your spouse th love honor and cherish
when you have kids
EVERY promise made to them must be kept,,they remember and it shapes thier lives..so do the promises unkept..know it did mine..My trust factor is to say the very least..reinforced by two ex-wives..
You can get away with not doing a good job on the first part, But you must do a perfect job on the second. Explaining why you cannot do something with a small kid does not count. All they know is the promise was broken, now they understand something like a broken leg, Mama in the hospital, but they remember the promise.
So should we all

What an ass.

Typical military that serve no useful purpose.

Wow!

It sounds like a different bunch of trolls came out on this one. Most of the commenters hated the faithful protaganist than the cheating, lying, slut wife! Just because he was miltary and had ethics that his wife didn't? I am so unused to commenters taking up for a lazy, unfaithful, self-centered wife that wanted nothing to do with his friends. She was lonely but wanted her own set of friends...those willing to cuckold her husband while he was gone. Wow! He is a cruel bastard isn't he?

I missed the part

where he says - other than paying the bills - what he will do or be. That said, she's not evolved enough for him.

Dwornocker, you better find a gun

Since you have no use for a military (or police) that protects your ass from enemies foreign and domestic I guess you better learn how to do it all by yourself. What history has taught us time and time again is that those that won't defend themselves are sooner or later taken over by others. You better do a good job of teaching yourself or you will be either dead or someone else's bitch.

It is the soldier

I liked the straight forward and honest plot. It's a refreshing break from some of the other stuff.

I understand the mentality of the protagonist. Coming home after deployment, especially from a war zone, can be difficult to adjust to. It can take weeks, or months, or even longer. For those having to rotate back to the shit after only a few weeks of down time, it's not a good idea to change too much. As my active duty friends say, "Gotta stay hard-core and frosty".

As for promises, as someone pointed out, the biggest promise was to love and cherish above all others. If a person breaks one promise, what's to keep them from breaking other promises? In the military, if you can't trust the guys to do their part --to keep their promises, then you're going to end up one dead mo-fo.

As for Dwornock...Here is something we should all keep in mind.

It Is The Soldier

It is the Soldier, not the minister
Who has given us freedom of religion.

It is the Soldier, not the reporter
Who has given us freedom of the press.

It is the Soldier, not the poet
Who has given us freedom of speech.

It is the Soldier, not the campus organizer
Who has given us freedom to protest.

It is the Soldier, not the lawyer
Who has given us the right to a fair trial.

It is the Soldier, not the politician
Who has given us the right to vote.

It is the Soldier who salutes the flag,
Who serves beneath the flag,

And whose coffin is draped by the flag,
Who allows the protester to burn the flag.

~Charles Michael Province, U.S. Army

To every brother soldier, marine, sailor, pilot, and even the coast guard, and to all those who have served, you have my undying thanks.

He promised to change

but is that only on the condition that she change? If so, then divorce is the best option for both of them. Afterall, he never promised what he would change and while he humiliated and demeaned her in front of his friends, he showed that he didn't love her either. Plus his broken vows of :Love, honor and respect....none of which were in evidence by his actions.

AS a soldier, he broke his promises but his wife is the guilty one? whatever.

Thanks, JL

Your response was much more eloquent than mine.

looking at comments is is obvious people didnt read the story

he already knew she was committing adultry before she dropped the i dont love you on him. He handled the breakup in a very civilized straight forward and caring way. She was a liar, a cheat, a slut, do you get it now?

Excellent

No respect. She had no respect for her husband fighting a war to protect our freedom. So ahe cheated and lied and told hin she wished she never married him. She got her wish, the cheating whore slut wife. Fuck her.

He comes home -

She slaps him in the face with the mistake comment and somehow he becomes the monster here?????

He took what she said - irrespective of what he did or did not know then, and once he had information he developed a plan. Executed the plan and made it clear he was not going to be the victim. More information and the plan evolved into an exit strategy.

She executed a plan while he was away and then lied and schemed to get more - she lost - di she cheat while he was away almost certainly - maybe not but she did betray him and his trust when he came home - she did plan to humiliate him by rebuilding him to suit her needs and ignore his life and its needs.

The ending was the perfect one - she did go right out and act single and got burned some more - she earned it.

It Is a Solider is right on - always has been.

PRAGMATISM IN THE MILITARY

and leaving a posted Dear Jane letter for all troops, TK U MLJ LV NV

This dude was an ass.

I know that this story was supposed to make the wife be the bad guy, but this dude turned out to be the real ass. He "pretended" to want to fix his marriage, but instead he turned everything around to embarrass and belittle her. After reading this story I felt she was right in her description of him. People who really want to work on their marriage try to do things to try to correct the wrong that is done. All he did was look for ways to call her out for being a horrible wife.

But not as much of an Ass as you Anon

Another decent piece of work from Scorpio. Shame that there are so many people in the world who just want and are not prepared to give as well.

anon, I agree with you

if you want to save your marriage you don't do things to put it in danger. You know like not fucking around with another man while your husband is defending your way of life....moron. The only ass was you.

I just ignore them.

This tale was outfuckin'standing. Another great one from Scorp. Glad I read it again, since I forgot to Fave it the first time though. The way he kept his cool and played her like a cheap fiddle was great! No sooner was he out of the house, than she was back at the club with the married Asshole she'd been fucking while he was overseas. Typical cheating slut for you. At least she got arrested after Asshole's Wifey beat the living snot out of her. LOL

As for the Anonytrolls, just ignore them. Not worth the hassle.

5 Big Stars. RLTY

Excellent story; expertly presented and well written.

The story is a no brainier. A lazy skank who thinks the world revolves around her and everyone else especially her husband are things at her beck and call was mind bending. How can anyone rationally sympathize with Misty?? Apparently some comments really did. Well it takes all kinds to make up a world, that's part of the reason we need a good military. Misty was certainly entitled to her feelings and to be who she was. Scorpio44a captured the essence of a very immature self centered low life skank in his description detail of Misty as one of the principle characters of this story.This story was frothed with emotion and Sgt Evans displayed his leadership ability and maturity in his handling of Misty. Thank You for your effort!

Abusive

What our "hero" did at supper is called mental abuse. With all the witnesses there, she had grounds for divorce if the trend ever continued.

A little reality please, Scorpio!