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not good
The last year cancels out the first 30. BTB and take the money for yourself. She's the one who threw away the first 30 years with the last year of screwing someone else.
Hmmmm....
She works so why give her so much money? I mean, a forth would do, even a third if he felt generous, but half? No way! You just don't reward cheating sluts for being cheating sluts, that's just wrong.
Good!
Good for him. He dumped her. I would have exposed the whole company and those involved in the cheating and never, ever gave her any of his winnings. A cheater deserves nothing and the less they get the better. Thank you for a very good story....so far...have to read Part 3.
THE NEW SUNSHINE WILL CHANGE AND VERY QUICKLY
and the comes ennui and boredom, TK U MLJ LV NV
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
yuck
You should have let this sleeping dog lie.
30 - 1
pretty good odds on the marriage. TK U MLJ LV NV
No way
30 years was wiped out by that last lying, cheating year. Fuck her. Keep the money and let her keep her job if she wants. She can survive on that. The only good thing here was the delivery of the pictures to his wife and the beating ol' Henry got. Another wimpy ending of a possibly good story.
Thanks for the offering.
After thinking about it some, he changed his doctor - AFTER SEVEN YEARS!
I know you are trying your best but the standard of writing and plot is way short of acceptable. 3* for trying
The Deciding Factor !
From the story line in chapter 2 it seems the lottery win was the deciding factor in the husband's decision.
With no financial security dependantsxftom his wife. The husband now had a choice to either stay with his wife and dave the marriage or branch out on his own now he had money !
It would have been a great story if the husband had to stay and work at the marriage.
At some point he would have come off his meds, take some blue pills and he could then have sex again.
Plus did the husband and wife not indulge in oral simulation of her, husband uding a dildo on her or even a male strapon toy.
Also wife IMO really want a relationship with a healthy male. Otherwise she could have gone on a swingers site to hook up with men just for sex. This would have been the better option as the dancing, drinking and socialising element would have been eliminated.
1 star
Anyone who uses the idiotic "took him to the cleaners" cliche get 1 star.
Ugh...
Jenny is simply a pathetic and unsympathetic character.
She started fucking Henry again?
Hope she dies of a disease!
Seriously... What is there to like about such a disgusting character?
Agree with silentsound
I am normally in favor of redemption, but Jenny is a low class slut who deserves a lot more punishment and far less kindnesses. Just her change of clothing from professional to whore is a window onto her poor character.
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