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Great start
loving it so far, just don't leave us hanging to long with and end like that.
Dont keep us...
waiting 2 long for the next update. I like reunion stories with a bit of angst!! See u soon.
I'm liking it so far!
Please continue. Great start!
on edge
That was a fabulous start and if what follows is anything like this chapter oh I'm definitely hooked! =) keep it up!
AWESOME
This is a great start. I can't wait for more. Hope it won't be to long a wait. Loved it!!!!
nice beginning to a longer story
Definitely, this chapter is "rather short". But it does hold promise for an interesting tale.
-- KK in Texas
nice start
for a long book with over 200 pages. but a threat for me reading chapter one. how many one page chapters does somebody need to write, to solve all that questions that have been asked here?
Aww come on
Must have more!!!
Awesome!!!
Great first chapter!!!
When will you submit ch.8?
To all those reading this now, don't bother, its not finished and after almost 5 years the author seems to have abandoned it.
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