by DiMSuMoRe
Take your time and write the story the way that you want to. I will still read it. Thanks and I am looking forward to reading some more hot monkey sex. LOL
another female who doesn't understand the word no, or the phrase, he's just not that into you.
I absolutely love this story...I'm so glad you posted another chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
I'm glad that you are starting to show the girls as people with brains rather than ghetto caricatures of black women. I found last chapter's portrayal of them as modern black women to be tacky and offensive. Can't you have an intelligent, well spoken and well mannered black woman? I know you can but your previous chapters didn't show that at all. This chapter was better. Clearly, I'm still reading after 3 chapters, so it can't be all bad. I like were stories and your storyline interests me. Just looking for positive characters now.
Really caught my eye so i just read all the stories and love it...hope your going to continue...its really good and not many stories like this on here.....so i will look forward to reading the rest of the story.....thanks
I love this story I have re-read it a few times. Please say that you are going to finish it.
This was a good beginning to a fantastic story. When can we expect more Updates...hmmmm???????
Nyeesha
Please hurry back and write more..this is a really good story!
I WANT MORE STORY!!! This story is awesome...please update sooon :D
You can't stop here! The story and writing are really good! Please, update soon. I want more of Ruaraidh. He's fuckin hott!
story wanna read more dont stop cauz im hooked. So write more chapters!!!!=]
I absolutely love this story! Please don't leave us hanging like this! You have the magic touch!
I absolutely love this story. I have been waiting for the longest time to see another chapter. Please dont leave this undone.
I just found this story and started reading it tonight now that I've gotten into it I do hope you will be updating it soon because its getting very interesting thanks!!
I love this story. I'd love to see more written and for the story to be complete.
Alpha R. is very disconnected from his wolf. His beast told him from the start who Chi Chi was. He is only just beginning to look at his feelings and see it is more than just a sexual thing. He's wondering.
I love this story!! I'm not even a huge fan of wolves, but this story has me hooked. You really know how to grab a reader's attention and this story is hot!! Please, please update when you can. I would love to know what happens next. Thanks
Such a great story you could expand in so many ways and brilliantly written! I love it!
I just stumbled across this and I'm getting hooked. So much drama, so much passion, all this taboo, all in chap2. Haven't even read chap 1. Love love love.