Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 04

More Please..

Great although short. Can't wait for next chapter.

hmph

Gloria and her boss need their asses kicked. Who needs enemies when you have 'friends' like this.

No Thanks

I already watched General Hospital.

Way Too Short

Not much happening

Where's this going?

So far, the story is interesting. But where's the sex???? Come on! This IS Literotica.com, just reminding you in case you'd forgotten. Please move things forward by writing LONGER stories.

I'm lovin' it!

sofar so fantastic! I have read more than one or two of your stories and I have loved every one. What I like the most is the fact that you take the time to develope the plot and the characters. I also really like the fact that most of the conflict comes from outside the relationship and the characters, through their love for each other,are able to conquer the problem, whatever it is. I'm sure I'm becomming your number one fan.

her baby

I like this story but I am getting tired of the hummer being referred to as her baby. I got it, she is proud of the purchase. I still love the story though.

Good Plot

Such an interesting story.

At least Mark and Regina believe Sabella's story. Gloria is up to no good. Malcolm and Sabella get along well. This time travel mystery is intriguing.