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It really is unfair that you dont finish any of your stories!! your shouldnt write them if you dont plan on finishing them. At least that way we wont be left hanging, checking in every other day for the next part of any of your stories!
He doesn't finish stories because he's like his character Jason.
He doesn't care about anyone but himself. He's totally self-absorbed and hasn't a clue about his anti-social tendencies.
What a jerk.
I'm pissed
I hate it when authors don't finish stories!! It upsets everyone. I understand a couple days leeway, maybe even a month but 2 years. Do yourself a favor and delete you account That way no one else needs to be disappointed.
I agree with the plees for you to continue writing and finish this story - we have been waiting a while. However, I must stress for you to ignore some of the stupid comments here. You obviously didn't start this story with no intent to finish it, and although this (long) wait is annoying, I'm pretty sure insulting comments telling you to 'delete your account' etc. Don't help your writing mood! Sorry for the rant, but love your work so far! Hope you find inspiration soon!
so cute, I love this story! and I completely agree with the comment below, please finish this story and don't delete your account!! thanks for being such a good writer :)
can you please please please finish this story. please finish it and ignore the dick and dont delete your account.
please finish the story please
I know I'm just as guilty, but...
...it's really not a good look to leave us hanging for too long. My writing's blech, but this is better than a lot of what's on television. Your readers are vested now, and need closure. Be a pal and do us a solid when you can.
Wtf
Second story that you didn't even finished. Such a bummer, you should at least delete your account so people don't waste their time reading then finding out you haven't finish the story and leave your readers hanging. So fuckedup.
Please Finish
I was really enjoying this story, please finish it
re-reading and still loving!
ok - there are some people you read and it is a very ho-hum experience ... and there are others who avoid cliche ... who show and tell just enough to engage ... who make the reader fall into the characters.
YOU are one of those.
it has been a while since you've written (and yes, this needs to go on chapter 5 instead of here - but I'm venting my spleen for you) ... BUT you are back
even if a story never gets finished - the reader has a chance to engage in a new set of characters, circumstances, situations, set ups, tension, excitement, disappointments, joy, elation, heartbreak, and resolution ... sometimes all in one chapter - sometimes some or none of it in a complete work
you do great stuff - keep it up for those of us who admire your skills
wishing you continued conversations with the muse and much success in your future works!
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