This story has a good base to it I hope you will continue. Might I suggest that you make her submissive to the daughter and play it out with the father catching them making it a very happy family? Otherwise as some of the other poster hinted to it would suck!
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This story has a good base to it I hope you will continue. Might I suggest that you make her submissive to the daughter and play it out with the father catching them making it a very happy family? Otherwise as some of the other poster hinted to it would suck!
agree it's going nicely
i liked the way it developed and the encounter changed as her tone did
Refreshing
I enjjoyed this story very much.
Thank you
Just GREAT
I think the story plot everything great and I laughed at the end !!! VERY GOOD !!! thanks again smco22000@aol.com Carmella
Did anything else happen between the girls
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