All Comments on 'Michelle'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Shocking!

Wow, I'm shocked! You wrote a story about yourself, where you're a sexual dynamo that women can't get enough of! What are the odds of that? Next thing you know someone will tell me water is wet or the sky is blue!

Hey, you're a good writer. The story is pretty well done, too. Too bad you're so fixated on yourself. I'm starting to think these stories should be put into the Masturbation catagory since it's clear nothing turns you on like you.

Calit69Calit69almost 15 years ago
Ouch

A grumpy reader. Rather harsh words, bru It is fictional writing and so what if the writer sees himself as Gods gift to women. Reasonably erotic and stimulating

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Masterful

You are the master. That is all.

xangel_eyezxxangel_eyezxover 14 years ago
nice....

Mmmm.... can I be your michelle? ;-)

vesjavesjaover 14 years ago
I came...

and I thought you should know. Makes me wish someone was here fucking my ass and treating my like a dirty little whore right now!

virginprincess18virginprincess18over 14 years ago
Me!!!

My name is Michelle and I have a virgin ass,I wished it was me all through the story

SejanusSejanusabout 9 years ago
One and done?

Did you ever get to (or want to) follow up with Michelle? Maybe use her ass again, as she seemed happily eager.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Amazing

I can feel the tightness of her ass clinching my cock now. Hot. I imagine it's my first ass of a girl I met backpacking in Europe.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

That was funny. She seemed to be much more sexual than you. Guess you met your match old man. :)

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