There's potential for a great story here but the punctuation and syntax needs a lot of polish. I like the premise and I'd like to see how this story continues.
why is there no continuation ?
You write excellent, keep on doing this
Too bad this story goes absolutely nowhere! All set up and no payoff. You should have listened to the ladies in the C.T.S.A. and let them have their fun.
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