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His Lordship's Delights

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by Anonymous05/06/09

Too short

You need to develop the story and characters more.

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by Anonymous05/07/09

Good Start

I agree with the first comment. Great start but ended too soon. I wish you had finished the background of the story, then forward to the present before you concluded chapter 1. However, like I said, it was a great start and definitely has my attention. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't make us wait long. :)

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by Anonymous05/12/09

Good Start But Far Too Short

Has interesting possibilities though. I look forward to reading more. Has the makings of a very good story.

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