All Comments on 'Modelling Mary Ch. 01'

Not erotic and at all.

to see another not communicating wife. I love it when they talk you to death about colours or clothes but are not able to talk about things that matter. you can stop that tale whenever you want.

The story was FAR too short, with not enough substance in it. But I think there was promise there, as the relationship could go either way. Also, it has me looking forward to the second chapter. But please make it longer next time.

university art class. They wanted something different in a male nude model and I gave them that. Although I am a senior citizen I am very buffed and look like (boody wise) a much younger man. Nothing can be done about the face.It's old but the body is im great shape. I spent hours flexing my muscles for the students to draw. I didn't once get a hard on . I am perfectly capable opf it. The room was pretty cool so that was a factor, I'm glad. The thing is that while the writer thinks something is going on with his wife but most of the students are just trying to get a good grade. The writer seems to have a sex problem and of course ANDY seems to be an immature punk. Every class has some of them. But everything is all in his head

Let us read the rest of the story. Is she having some other male fill her sexual desires? Thanks ......Rich

of a thing called spell checker?????

You dont call it cheating when you are paid to fuck, you are whoring.

I have rarely seen such a collection of inane comments, especially the last two. For your information, modeling and fucking are not synonymous. As a student (age 21) I was in a drawing class with female models (the students were all male) and the last thing on our minds was sex. It was all about getting what we saw down on paper.

The second to last, calling for a spell-checker, is even more inane. I couldn't see s single spelling error in your story. Are there people who don't realize that British and US spelling rules differ?

The story wasn't one of those that get me going big time, but it was fine. I can't blame you for not sharing my peculiar taste in erotica. And I'll gladly read chapter 2 when that comes out.

Keep going!

In a marriage kill it, if it was my wife we would have a serious problem. Perhaps you would find your wife fucking around erotic, most men wouldn't but to each their own. Did like the drawings thanks.

Is this guy and idiot. A wife has secret signed pictures of her naked hidden from her husband. Wow, where is trust and commitment? She is paid to model nude, that much we know. One of the pictures does not seem to be in an studio but perhaps it was. So the real question is why is the wife hiding the pictures from her husband? How long until the husband confronts the wife? How long before the wife admits she was sexually used while the modelling occurred? When does the husband throw the whore out? Sorry did I outline your chapters. But then again perhaps you are on the path to where the husband wants to watch the wife be buggered and used and he becomes a little boy cuck.

A great job on developing a story. For my wife and me we found it intriguing and wanting to read more about this budding hot wife adventure. Love will prevail and the memories will last a lifetime. Two cheers and lets here more.

Thanks

Al and Sue

I liked the story. What there was of it, that is. Please fill it out some more and re-post or write a chapter 2.

...hope your Missus really has posed!