All Comments on 'Persistant Love'

Congratulations on putting pen to paper. The story ranges from vivid to repetitive. Parts are really good such as the dialogue before the letters which were more like a dear diary. Scene at the beach good Initially had to persevere introduction could have been condensed as well as the letters. Not sure who is really the gay as Rich is definitely the romantic and quite accomplished for one weekend. Johnny will rim before he will kiss or give a bj.Peculiar. The only thing that absolutely grossed me out(finished me off?) was Johhny wiping his lubed hands on the tea towel on the bed. Urgh. Havent read your other submission but feel that you could have shortened this story and explored the actual experience versus reality with Johnny, who is how wide? Certainly dont give up writing you have some talent

Beautiful story and loved, loved, loved your writing. You could feel the emotions just coming off the pages here. Awesome job! A++++++++++++++++++++++++

Great story! Love the romance....very sweet.

A lovely tale. Being US Navy in the not so nice 60s, I can relate. Your story captures a lot of the attitude and atmosphere of the times. I'm enjoying your writing.

Amazing!!! great writing