All Comments on 'Madness of the Moon'

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PassionatePattyPassionatePattyalmost 15 years ago
I want more!!!

You are such a tease! I love it!

SxRxSxRxalmost 15 years ago
Rich and Sensual

Dearest Author,

I've insisted that you were a wordsmith of the highest order, and this bit of perfection proves my case! The story pulls the reader into your magical world of poetic prose that paints the loveliest of word images. Oh, to be the admirer in the dark corner and to watch this sensuality unfold like a tender moonflower and then to drink of her nectar...Mmmm

SxRx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
that was chapter ? ?????

eager to read the the prequel ....? or maybe the sequel and then the prequel ?.....i know you will share the right step that needs to be taken ......with all us CAPTIVATED readers

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
I think

this is grand. It is technically perfect and reads like poetry. Very impressive work done in an incredibly few words.

Rayven101Rayven101about 14 years ago

Your writings are following my own desires....I loved this!! Well done :)

goldenassgoldenassalmost 14 years ago
Gorgeous prose

You are a gifted eroticist.

KitschshamanKitschshamanabout 13 years ago
gorgeous

simply gorgeous, thanks

luvjuice43luvjuice43about 12 years ago
Wonderful!

Told as only a woman could describe.

NymphMyosotisNymphMyosotisover 11 years ago
Dreamy

Beautifully written and very lyrical. I very much enjoyed reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A great read

It makes me want to know what the two of them do afterwards. And watching her in my mind and hearing her moan and gasp, is very sexy. Keep writing and posting please. I would love to read much more from you.

N2outdoorsN2outdoorsabout 7 years ago
Artist

You are a true artist, using words to paint a canvas. I could almost feel myself in the room with her, or you. You are a very talented lady. I'm looking forward to reading more of your art.

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