All Comments on 'Identity Ch. 01'

I absolutely love this story....a really impressive fisrt chapter. cant wait to read more.

Once again, great story developing. So glad to see you writing again. Would be great if the chapters were a bit longer but who am I to complain.

Are you a Readers Digest author, condensing stories into a few lines? Great start to story lets read more. All too brief. Get cracking on next chapter. Arigato gozaimasu

Are you a Readers Digest author, condensing stories into a few lines? Great start to story lets read more. All too brief. Get cracking on next chapter. Arigato gozaimasu. Asking very nicely and politely

Yay, you're writing again! And boo, you didn't tell me beforehand. Now I must have a moment of pique...okay, done! I can't wait for more, I like the tie-in to the earlier piece.

Impressed so far even though the chapter was short. But there's nothing like a teaser to get your readers intrigued! Looking forward to the next installment.

Absolutely love your writing. This story has started off great. Looking forward to more!

Ive been waiting for the continuation of your story and now its already 2o days .i want more more more from you.

Poor Chet but I also feel sorry for Asato as well as it must be hard having flashes that create a harsh reaction not that I approve of what he did to Chet. There is history between these two me thinks... onto the next chapter to find out if I am right or wrong

Jeez, your main character is seriously unpleasant, you know? Since when is rape sexy?

Agreed - starting off with a main character who's a rapist doesn't bode well . . .