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by UnderYourSpell04/29/09

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A really good idea for that trigger and what a delightful child you were .... not! One small niggle should that read 'shop assistants'?

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by Tzara04/30/09

Good solution to the trigger, Ms. T,

and an interesting, affecting poem. I hope this was imagined and not really your life growing up.
The word "pretension" is misspelled, at least here in the South. If you Northerners spell that differently, just ignore that comment. :-)

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by annaswirls04/30/09

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Hi! Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poetry Thread: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=25415 7&page=136

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