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Maid Wife Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/01/09

short

and not good.

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by digdaddyrich05/01/09

She needs to get Jim to help her

Her lover needs to protect her from the neighbor, Have Jim go over and kick the old man's ass and threaten him of serious pain if he tries that again with his woman. Thanks.........Rich

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by StoryTeller0705/02/09

Agree

I agree with Rich. Appreciated your profile, nice - 'interested in'. It might take a while before I get to submit the next chapter as I have a few stories on the go. Thanks for taking the trouble to comment, alwasy appreciated. Regards Storyteller

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by Anonymous05/02/09

nice but too short

I liked it but it felt rushed and short I would rather see more interaction between her and the man next door than just a rough fuck. her having to obay him with out him being aware is good you should do more of that

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