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love it is so nice to see part a girl werewolf from the typicalalpha male
A Good Story!
I like the plot in this story. This is a very good read!
confused
your story was good, however your "shewolf" sounds more like an vampire than a wolf.
Sorry,
I wanted to read, general plot sounded interesting, male lead sounded interesting, but I have a few hang-ups, smoking is one of them, drugs are another.
good luck in the future but I probably won't be back.
wow, this is great. Seriously, the way you describe the surroundings of rain is really well done. nice job, i'll be reading more.
I liked the plot, I really do
I skipped to read some of the next chapter before I wrote this.
I like the idea of what's happening: supernatural female going after human male. I wish more stories used this plot rather than usually a supernatural male. But everything moves a little too quick in the story in my opinion. Not that I want to read a story that drags on, but you make it so quick, that I can't get into it, and it starts feeling really fake and childish. If that makes sense. It felt like you used the drugs and partying as a crutch for them meeting and interacting. Just my own opinion.
Thanks for posting.
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