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Hell yeah help her out, bust the damn company.
She wants to feel useful have her open a day care center for working moms and hire some of the best workers available. Take back a woman who did the things she did to him, hell no, no way in hell. She not only cheated on him she spit humiliation at him. Folks that isnt done by a loving wife, it is done by a true slut.
Not a wimp!
I love this! It ended just the way it should have. Thank you.
Good Story
I liked the story and I liked the end.
I only have this to say..................
Years ago, when I started in IT, my boss used to use a term that really fits this story.....
Mental Masturbation
What that means is to go through the motions but not get any payoff from it.
This story, in all three parts, tried to cover all the bases, but in the end didn't do any of it well.
First the wife cheats, but the story kinda gives the impression that the husband blamed himself for it because he couldn't get it up to satisfy her. If he had been able to perform she wouldn't have looked elsewhere. Never mind the first story had the folks at her office picking on him, even on that trip where they all got together behind his back, but it made him feel lower than crap. And the ending was left open like he was forced to live with it
Then the second story was supposed to be about him growing a pair of balls then leaving a wife who could treat him so bad and publicly humiliate him. But it really kept making him look petty more than anything
Then the final part has him pretty much divorced, getting all the sex he can handle, then keeps referencing him "Growing up" and pretending that now that he's had all the young ladies he can stand, he wants to go back to his ex-wife and she's standing there with open arms waiting for him. The woman who was able to find another man to cheat on him with is now a virtual bag lady with no one?
That's mental masturbation. Why did he even get mad in the first place? Why did they get divorced? Why didn't he just go have a few affairs, take the "perceived" (by him) high ground and say "You did it to me and I'm just getting mine back" then afterwords both of them pretend it never happened? See all that effort and the result is the same, he accepted all the public humiliation, is back with his ex-wife, and is now telling the world to screw off if they don't want to accept him getting back with her. Why leave her in first place if that was his attitude?
Thanks for writing, but you probably could have stopped at part 2 or even part one. Part three just makes him look childish and the constant references to him "Growing up" so that he takes her back looks out of place and does nothing for the story, save trying to justify the two of them getting back together.
-Risq
not a wimp
Your not a wimp. You took the time to be apart. Started rebuilding as friends.
As men we expect the women to forgive us and take us back. 30 years of friendship is more import than prride.
Good story.
maybe you need that
but it hasn't done good the story at all. no talk about wimp or whatever no. but the way you designed the carachter of his wife in part one would make it completly impossible to go back, maybe for somebody with Alzheimer's disease. and you made her even worse in this chapter. with all the money she had gotten and him out of the way, she wasn't crushed, no she lived. but loosing her job made her terrible, she did not want to live. so take back a woman who openly destroyed her marriage and made her husband the town clown and loves her job more than her husband, kids and grandkids nobody wants to deal with. believe me. so if you write and design carachters that have to get back together be a bit more careful otherwise its not readable.
Weakest of all three chapters
I hope you are a man who keeps his promises.
CrApOlA
WiMpOlA...
companionship with someone you trust?
I think he found it to be nice to be with someone that wasn't there for his money. Sounds like a good relationship. Thanks .....Rich
read it all
READ IT ALL and it is a piece of crap no your not a wimp a wimp can be useful.
Good Start - Poor Ending!
One essential flaw in this story was the premise for reconciliation? William gets sick and due to his medication can not perform as usual. During the first year you can see Jenny sucking it up but 6 years? So her solution is to seek out strange dick pretending nothing is wrong in their relationship. So your best friend betray you and you have no clue nothing is amiss. You find out and there are consequences. At first William is dependent on her health insurance (a very real problem) but lo here comes the lottery. Now William take the action he should have taken years ago to seek alternative medication to a problem that affected both their day to day lives. If you had ended with Chapter 2 the story would have be fine. Instead you have them get back together because of some injustice to Jenny.
Let's examine this injustice. Both Jenny and Henry violated the company policy so Jenny deserved her termination. Jenny shacked up with Henry after her divorce. Why? She had enough money from her share of the lottery. Since she said that it was just sex why did she move in with Henry? She was the one who had her co-worker laugh at her best friend while she fucks her lover in the same hotel. In this part of the story she blamed her depression on losing her job (thereby having nothing to do) and losing William. She kicked Henry out. She could not find any volunteer work? Face it- all of the reasons William stated at the end of Chapter 2 was still true so William seems at the end to be a different character than the one presented in the first two Chapters.
Excellent story.
If a person can't forgive, then what's he worth?
I bet many of the Literotica detractors are Christian. How do they deal with their God being a wimp?
Rich
well..........
Well, not bad. It's a sweet wrap-up. But all things considered, you probably should have stopped with the second chapter.
-- KK in Texas
Minority vote
Kind of an up and down story, but you did a great job of weaving the good and bad parts of the story into one cohesive interesting story. Nice writing.
the Ct. Yankee
Fair Ending
I thought that the 2nd chapter was the end but this one was even better. You helping her, still shows your kindness. We all make mistakes because we are human being and we are meant to make mistakes, but we should learn from them. Jenny learnt her lesson, Henry got what he deserved, the firm was hit by you, what else you want. The important thing is you both are together for 30 years that's a long run partnership. It was good to see William and Jenny back together. I liked the ending.
why a third chapter?
this was stupid, i mean technically you could have stopped at chapter 1 but chapter 2 seemed to be a decent ending. whats with this "growing up" bullshit? so its childesh to expect your partner to not cheat,especially in such a public and insulting way? its childesh to get a divorce and try to move on? thats retarded and this was third chapter was completely pointless. and whats with all these authors thinking that reconciliation is the happy ending? because its not, at least not all the time and im pretty sick of stories where the kids try to blackmail the dad or mom into seeing each other because he/she is a trainkwreck ,not eating, etc. could you at least try to write a believable story? word to the wise, you dont grow up after 6 months or so and decide all those feelings of anger, betrayal, humiliation, etc. just disappear and are replaced with loneliness. no, i dont think hes a wimp, i thinks hes fucking retarded.
My two cents . . .
The writing was reasonably good; only a few grammatical errors and such. The plot of this third chapter is more controversial than that in chapter two; certainly when the pain is fresh, it is difficult to reconcile. But after a few years, the pain lessens and forgiveness is possible. I'm not sure why she really wants to get back with William. After two years, can the love still be there? No mention in the story regarding Jenny's fidelity or dating situation. One presumes she is not dating when she is losing weight and all depressed, but what did she do after Henry dumped her? Did she have other boyfriends? We never really know if she has cheated other times or not. Chances are, she has. I could see William being seduced by his ex if he still has some loving feelings for her despite her betrayal, maybe after he has had a few too many and no young pussy for a while. Time does heal a lot of things. I think some counseling should have been in the picture if we are to really believe a reconciliation has occurred; otherwise, with the first argument, William is likely to throw the cheating episode back in Jenny's face. Thanks for writing.
30 years counts!
I'm sorry for all of those "anonymous" writers who wish to burn and bury the erring spouse. There is such a thing as grace (unmerited favor) and the person who can practice grace has it all over those who cannot. Alone does not compute for me. Like many of my friends, "I don't do alone!" so sue me. One of your detractors is so against reconciliation that he is practically foaming at the pen. Someone famous once said that man's closest claim to divinity was his ability to forgive in the face of the unforgivable. She erred, grow up! The only one who never erred was crucified at the age of 33!
what does THIS chapter have to do with 1 and 2?
The author seems to have forgotten what he wrote in chapter 1 and 2. Having the husband gets lots of sex from woman in 20s and 30s is NOT what this story was about.
The wife had an Obligation to tell him what she wanted to do. The lack of SEX for 7 years must of been difficult for the wife.
But that does NOT justify what Jenny did. She fucked her boss. She had a long term 1 year Plus sexual and emotional affair with her boss and EVERYONE at Jenny's company knew about it.. and was laughing at the husband.
The wife did NOT have 1 night stands. She did not fuck other men in other towns.
when faced with a crisis the wife decide to have a whole separate life with another man for over a year.
Not at all bad. I liked the ending
I've read a lot of stories and this one was fun. I think the ending was perfect. You have to have walked in his shoes to understand and I have. Contrary to many comments, if you haven't tried the young chickees, don't blast it. A man needs to smile after all that crap. Good job.
Fantasy Land
WHAT WAS THE LAWSUIT AND THE TWO MILLION DOLLAR SETTLEMENT FOR? "...he did get you a very nice settlement and a written promise to review the company's policies concerning the problem of sexual harassment in their firm." THE WAY YOU WROTE THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS, IF ANYONE WAS GUILTY OF SEXUAL HARRASSMENT AT THAT WORK PLACE IT WAS WILLIAM'S WIFE, JENNY. SHE WAS THE ONE CHASING ANYTHING THAT COULD GET AN ERECTION, REMEMBER!!! YOU CAN'T RAPE THE WILLING, SO HOW DO YOU SEXUALLY HARRASS THE PARTY WHO INITIATES THE SEX, NAMELY JENNY??
You never should've....
...caved & made the last 2 parts of your story. Your first was well written & executed & I ADORED the open-endedness of it. These other partgs feel forced & it shows in the writing which isn't up to par with your original.
The reason...
Jenny could win a suit is because she was the only aggrieved party.(Got fired,remember?)But the whole premise for hubbys indignancy over her affair was compromised by the revelation that a simple med switch would have prevented the whole scenario.Outlines allow an author to pen a coherent storyline. But keep on truckin' brother, this reader is running out of stories!Pistolpackinpete
That's still not
sexual harrassment, Mr ppp.
A Tale well told.
Loved the ending. As others have pointed out 30 years does mean something. William was hurt, who wouldn't be, but in two years a man can learn a lot of things about himself. But really what really woke him up was when someone he did care about and loved got screwed over. This awakening brought out the old lion. He may have realized that he left Jenny after his heart attack. They both struggled to keep him alive and that was enough for many years, but he should of realized that he had put his wife in a very hard place. He was leaving her unsatisfied and unfullfield a mistake a lot of men make. What had been so important to both of them he blew off. Now he realized what part he had played. But don't mess with the old Lion. He came back stronger and more manly in my opinion. His closing statement of walking a mile and my shoes etc. Makes it real for me. This is only my opinion and as Bill said but in more polite terms, if you don't like it BITE ME.
Stop
I get the impression you have written chapters 2 and 3 in response to the comments you received. Whilst they are good in their own right, I don't think you needed to write them. Responding to comments is all well and good but it means you are not writing your story. If you feel your readers comments are useful, include them in new stories, don't try to re-write what you have written to appeal to critique. You show great promise, but stop writng what you think someone wants you to write. Write what you want to. You will develop your own style that way.
Isn't this more 'real' than most stories?
Let me put it this way. If I was 67 years old and I had an ex-wife who I was previously married to for 30 years. And still cared for. Then I would probably dot he same as this husband has done. As someone said 30 years counts for a hell of a lot. I'm not entirely sure that this story needed a third chapter but I am gald you wrote it. And yoru writing is getting better. Keep going your doing fine.
Interesting and well written
I do think that she injured him too much for him to take her back. With the amount of money she had she could open her own company and he could be her business adviser. In answer to the title, I would have moved on with someone my own age... but to each his own and the writer writes what he feels is best. Sometimes just what makes the biggest splash.
I admit that I would reccomend stopping at chapter 2.
I liked it
34 years(four years living together plus 30 of marriage) is so much too not reconsider the affair.PaulH.
Sad and pathetic
A plot device: Blackmailed by his son to see the light?
An ultimatum in the form of marching orders: crawl back to Mamma or I won't let you see your grand child ever again? The lottery idea seems like a brilliant plot device compared with this one.
And the take home message to the readers: prepare for your thirtieth anniversary a gift of one year of free cheating for your spouse – he/she has earned it! I think I have a better advice: don't!
Not even worth commenting on.... Zero score
saids it all.
What would I do now?
Well the first thing that I am going to do is to add your name to the kill filter list and secondly I am going to bang my head against the wall for wasting the time to read your stupid story. Does that answer your question?
Nah! Fuk U!
"So sue me, I'm a wimp" "I am a wimp, not a man" You said it all right there! You really didn't need an editor or all those other words.
PLEASE REMEMBER YOUR PROMISE....
NOT TO WRITE ANOTHER WORD FOR THIS PITIFUL STORY...IN FACT, DON'T WRITE ANOTHER WORD FOR THIS WEBSITE, PERIOD...
I sometimes worry....
about all the he-man women haters on this site, or rather the women, assuming they have any, in their lives. Actually I do not worry that much since so much of their words sound like silly posturing.
Look I do think you had the wife take it too far, and it got to ugly for me to see reconciliation. ON the other hand, I have been with my love for 25 years. If we stay together, until the age of your characters, that would make it nearly 40. 40 years of love, affection, sex...of being my wife, best friend, mother to my children, etc. I might not reconcile with her, but I would certainly, as a man, take into account all that she was to me for all of those years, should something similar every happen. I would still not let anybody shit on her, and yes, I would share our wealth freely because we were in it together. That is not being a wimp that is being someone take care of business the way it should be. As to the other man, that is a different story.
In any event, I liked, did not love it, but I did like it a lot.
M
Nice Story
Except for a few grammatical errors, I felt your story was well written. I liked the plot and agreed that the main character’s decision to take Jenny back, even after her flagrant affair, was definitely in the realm of possibilities. You cited some good factors for that to happen. Almost 30 years together and a few years of cooling down so the pain and humiliation had time to dissipate with her company of employment treating her unfairly as a catalyst. However, I do think you went a little overboard with the fiction aspect of the story. I realize that reading and writing fiction is supposed to be fun but your cliches were over the top and only gave your story the appearance of being ridiculous. The Navy Seals, winning the lottery, bikini clad beauties (especially when he’s around 67), and son’s blackmail threat, to name a few, only cheapened your story and moved it from Loving Wives to Fantasy. Still, all in all, a pretty good effort for your first story. Don’t get discouraged by crude remarks. As they say, consider the source. The type of comment directly reflects on the character of the person submitting it. If they can only give crude remarks as opposed to corrective feedback it is because that is the extent of their capabilities. Hopefully, they will go back to school and get their GED. Of course, we can’t change their childhood :) Don’t hate them, pity them. Thank you, I hope you continue writing.
WHAT A BUNCH OF CRAP !
Putas just cannot write anything but bullshit when attempting to depict a male. Putas project their own mythological beliefs about males onto every male character they write of and this puta did it all including the so called 'frail male ego' myth - it's a myth cause it's in reality the female frail ego and it's projected onto males. Why else do putas demand being hyped all the time by males but for their 'lack of self esteem' which translates as a FRAIL FEMALE EGO !
What Would You Do Now?
Well, what I am going to do now is to ask my neighbour to come and give me a kick on the arse for being so stupid to read this piece of crap
WIMP
Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp, Wimp!
Oh, Yes...Wimp!
Help her yes. Kick out the cuties to take in a
wornout old slut you have to be kidding me. Let her move into a guest house and be the housekeeper, she can feel needed and wanted there. Your new lifestyle keeps you alive, why change she really didnt?
and then!
I felt that it was a good conclusion. Now I have to read more of your stuff.
yep, pretty much worse read on this site.
you are a bigger loser than the person in your story.
some readers need help
I came to this story a little late and read all three chapters at once. After looking briefly at some of the comments, I can't understand why writers like woodmanone continue to write for the site. Evidently there are a number of angry women hating men who just read loving wife stories to get their rocks off on having the writer destroy the woman. Quite a few need to see a mental health expert or take anger management classes.
This site must attract asshole.
Woodman you should make your critics reveal their age and then ignore everyone under 35. Please don't listen to the igits that want a stroke story about a 60 year old couple, better to keep it real and believeable. Many of your pissant critics don't know anyone who has been married 30 years, including many of their parents I suspect, so how can they understand your characters motavations? The biggest problem I had with the last chapter was the son's ultimatium to the father, the emotion, the disrespect and the total collapse of the situation at the end of that chapter. It went from a "fuck you old man" to "all is forgiven, let's have a beer". Keep up your efforts and try to ignore the assholes. anon jerry
Sorry in attempting to correct prior stuff you
only make it worse. You forced reconciliation at any cost. He doesnt have to reconnect to whore, she fucked at work related events with people from work, by definition taking money for sex is whoring. He could easily have helped her without getting reinvolved. She had an independent income so work was not the issue, self esteem was. Had the husband done what he should have originally the company would have fired maybe her and Henry but would have changed the sexual policies. As it was his lack of action reinforced their ability to fire her and keep Henry, after all who really wants to keep an old wornout slut? Or he could have helped her without ever getting involved with her. But the real thing is she didnt want to help herself. She had money she could have easily volunteered and done useful work or gotten another job, no she didnt want to help herself, her guilt was to high. You took a cuck made him and wimp then forced him back with the slut so he can be a cuck again. She doesnt need to have more outside sex the first time makes him a cuck permanently, it is an earned title.
Great Story
Author, you have written one of the most realistic stories on this site! One does not get many chances in life to have a 30 year relationship of love, friendship, companionship, and a good family. That you could have the chance to reconcile that loving relationship is unique in todays "throw it away society". Nowadays few find that kind of life or work hard enough to make it happen. As an old codger myself, I can guarantee that after two long term marriages there is no such thing as a marriage without troubles and things to forgive and forget. I think that the Nazi woman haters on this site are unhappy and lonely men who have caused distruction in their own once happy lives and are in pain because of it... Some dissenters, I think, are just being cute by dissing the stories that don't have the endings they prefer. They can do so anonymously like highschool kids. You know, the ones that used to write on bathroom walls that some girl was a whore or pig because they went out with someone other than them! In any case, any really manly commenter would be willing to write their real name and give an articulated reason when you blast an author. I have heard that a lot of you reside in a cell somewhere and hate the world for your own mistakes. I hope I reach a lot of you pitiful self-righteous sounding idiots... If this weren't a free site, I doubt that most of you would even be reading these stories... I appreciate this entertainment having just found it in the last year or so. I don't like some of the endings myself, and I am not much for the erotic stories, but I respect the author's giving us different endings to these cheating wives stories instead of trying to please you "Torch the Bitch" types! Heres my name, since I just vented and challenged you morons... Write your own "Torch the Bitch" stories and flood the site if that is what you wish. You evidently have "Some" audience for your ranting!
Loved it!
Read it again and loved it again! Don't quit writing...
I can't say I liked this one
The first two chapters were good. The forced recon on the last one just kind of killed it. He had no reason to go back to her. She was a wholesale cheater and while he might want to forgive her, might want to forget about her. He certainly shouldn't go back to her. As for his son? Well if my kid had gotten on that way with me, I'd have told him where the door was. You don't need FRIENDS like that let alone family. You have some really good stories here and I like almost all of them. This one is well written, just poorly ended. So, I will just call this one an aberration.
Better luck next time
Martyr
John Wayne
"Walk a mile in my shoes then go fuck yourself." I think Mr Wayne would have been proud of you.
30 years together
Its a good story, and for me this is the key statement "I can't stress enough 30 years together".
For those commentators that can't forgive after that length of time together as a couple I would suggest that they need to examine their own thinking and remove their head from their ar*e.
G
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