What Would You Do Now? Ch. 03

great read

i have read all of your works, you r good ,love all your stories, this one hits home, every thing is the same except my wife passed, so i know the pain . thanks

good ending

Time has a way of healing the pain. At their age, reconciliation can work. He did the right thing on the discrimination issue, and they were both ready to grow old together. I liked your ending.

The DJ

Good read for those of us over 60

I enjoyed the simplicity of the story and the straight talk. It also "rang" as a very realistic response to a bad situation- but also, a realistic reconciliation story.

THIS FICTION HAS A RING OF TRUTH

especially in the corporate sector and it happens all the time in many professions. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the offering.

yep your a wimp

I would say fuck your self, but you already did...

Sadly ....

I think you wrote her actions of screwing while with her husband at the get together and dug yourself a hole where no amount of anything would dig you out enough to justify any type of reconciliation. If she did it while not with her husband I could see it but not the way she acted with him present.

More Realisam and Less Fantasy Fiction

And good ztory dealing with realistic situations if life.
Male penile erection dysfunction is a serious situation for a married couple, or even a female after menopause or with server medical condition will not the sex drive of the female.
So dealing with these issues instead of size queen wifes cuckolding husband's for bigger cock.
In this series of chapters the wife never mentioned if the sex with her colleagues was any better than with her husband or if he had bigger cock !
As cock size os not always ehy a wife would stray !

Okay I'm slow

I understand loyalty to someone you once loved or maybe still love. You don't want to see them screwed over by ignorant under handed people with an agenda.
The main character was over 60 and a Military man which means he came from a time when there was respect for your once loved ones you never really turn your back on them.
Yes the writer made the wife of over 30 years a horn dog and let's face reality a 60 year old woman isn't looking for sex.
When women reach that age they are looking for family companionship and comfort.

Then the old ladies got double crossed by the inventor of viagra. The old ladies though the days of having to put up with humping, sweating, someone bouncing on their bellies and aching joints was over. (Damn inventors 🤓)
Their ages and behavior for those ages was the only short side of the story I found.
If you're going to use that as a reason make the people younger.

A fine ending. He did the right things at the right time.

Let's hope they live a long and happy friendship.

Once again: incompetent writer, inexplicable character personality reversal.

Horrible

Terrible writing with wimpy loser as lead character.... You should just stop now....

Mostly shit

With a dash of bullshit on the side.

You didn't do anything to redeem Jenny or explain why she started fucking Henry, a still married man, again after her divorce.

She is written as a pathetic, soulless cunt that cares more about getting fucked than anything else in the world.

A truly poor offering.

Bad

1

The moral: It's OK to be a whoring slut

This is a woman who planned her trysts csrefully. She changed from business clothing to short shirts and sheer blouses beforehand. Met in a group sex situation in a private room with other couples. Continued her affair after causing her marriage to implode. And despite all this, made out like a bandit in her divorce, and after three years of "woe is ", managed to get back into her husband's life and bed. The lesson here is: it pays to be a shoring slut.

Walk A Mile in Your Shoes

Wouldn't like that since there is so much bullshit on them. Why are you so defensive when its your own fault that people hate your ending? You write two pieces of the story and then in the third part force an unbelievable reconciliation on the characters with no build-up, no basis, and a total disregard of everything you have written previously. So, FU and the ending gets a well deserved 1*. You deserve 1* for whining.

well said

@Yesezduzit 04/01/13 said:

A mature woman who was a good woman deciding she needed sexual needs met, would never ever go public and carry on this way. Especially in front of co-workers, not just once but several times?
Only a long active slut would act that way.

A decent woman? Thinking she needed some sort of tryst would be very, very discreet.

She is one or the other.
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That is why this ending is so wrong.
What she did was not simply getting her 'needs for sex' met.

NEXT!!

That's what the cheating whore will be calling in no time flat. I mean, lasting all of five minutes will have her looking for longer lasting dick in no time flat. She's already proved that's all she's interested in.

I do appreciate the effort

But reading stories like these tend to put me firmly in the BTB camp. Gave you 3 for effort.

If you want

To write a decent reconciliation story you have to earn it. This one wasn't earned. No mention at all of her shack My up with Henry for months afte he'd so publically disrespected her husband? She'd probably still be with him if things had gone a little differently.