I am loving your story, but I think you should look at getting an editor. I noticed a few mistakes where it looks like you went to write one thing then changed your mind and wrote something else without correcting the sentance. It did make your story a bit hard to read in some places but overall I am liking it. Would love it if you made the chapters a bit longer too but I think i'm just being greedy.
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Anonymous05/04/09
Oh come on!
*sighs* you are far too talented at creating these little "teasers"! But I'm hooked! Please post again soon!
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Anonymous05/04/09
great story
came across Liar yesterday and checked the story. Surprise it's the same story that I have been waiting for at Erotica Republic (either you're the same author with a different pen name or plagiarism) whichever hope to read the next chapters be it here or at the other site. Great story!!
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Fantastic
This is absolutly a great story. i can't wait for the next chapter(s). i like the gradual build up of the story so far.
FAB!!!
cannot wait for the next chapter. Im in love with Gabe!!
Excellent!
I love your story so fare, please keep them coming!
Thank you Thank you!
WOW Love it!
Great Story
I am loving your story, but I think you should look at getting an editor. I noticed a few mistakes where it looks like you went to write one thing then changed your mind and wrote something else without correcting the sentance. It did make your story a bit hard to read in some places but overall I am liking it. Would love it if you made the chapters a bit longer too but I think i'm just being greedy.
Oh come on!
*sighs* you are far too talented at creating these little "teasers"! But I'm hooked! Please post again soon!
great story
came across Liar yesterday and checked the story. Surprise it's the same story that I have been waiting for at Erotica Republic (either you're the same author with a different pen name or plagiarism) whichever hope to read the next chapters be it here or at the other site. Great story!!
More!
I need to know what happened to make Sloane leave!
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