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by lorencino06/16/09

A bull's eye

. . . touches my cunt
Shell pink, wet and wanting
. . .
As I shiver into a moment of heaven
Sliding down ladders
And at the bottom let it go . . .

Highly successful imagery which captures the essence of the beauty and the ecstasy you are writing about. You are both hot and talented.

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