All Comments on 'My Sister's Deception Ch. 02'

I want more...

cannot wait for part 3!

An honest and heartfelt treatment of sibling sex. It's tender and erotic at the same time. Looking forward to the next installment. Don't let the folks here rush you to the next chapter. Good things are always worth waiting for.

Love this story. I hope you don't take as long for the next part as it took for part 2.

i like the way you have lead them up to this point with both chapters. and involving the ex gf is a good thing too. keep up the great work

Well constructed, and smooth dialog. The plot moves along at a good pace, and the action is realistic. It's rather unusual and nice that the story doesn't dwell on the sizes of penises and breasts. It reads as a professionally written story.

good second chapter but needs atleast one or two more but please don't get meghan involved keep it between the two of them

I think it would be in this case. I agree with those who want to keep it between the two of them. Do give us more!

I really enjoy this story. It is a fantastic tale. Please continue writing more chapters to this story

are you going to do anouther chapter for this story? plz do i would love to read it

Keep it going!

I'm curious too.

Really enjoying it so far, and looking forward to your buildup's payoff.

Can't wait for the continuation of this! Very erotic so far, can't keep my hands out of my pants!

Loving this story but where is the next chapter. Please write the next part, it has been too long since this was writen.

Loved this story, loved your style. Excellent writing, good characters, one feels there's more to come. One would like to hope so...

continue this story?

Good plot and storyline is actually believable!

Hope you plan to finish it!

This story still needs an ending.... please?

Hope to see a Chapter 3 real soon!

But, it sure does need to be finished. Are you going bring this story forth like a newborn child, or just abort it and never finish the job??? It would be sad if you just left it as it is.

Reading some of your older work while waiting for another chapter of Lost & Found. This is just so good. There has got to be more....

This is a very good story line I hope you continue to develope it. I look forward to your next chapter of this series.

I love the way you write. I feel as though I am in the room listening and watching.Hard and sexy!

Like this

I gave you another 5/5 in spite of the fact that this was basically a 1.5 page installment. I was really hoping for a lot more. But Jen and Kyhl are both expressing their love for each other and that is why I'm still giving you full marks. If they were just fucking instead of actually making love, then I would be extremely disappointed. I hope that further installments are longer and the story has a happy ending. But it's 14 years old or older and the possibility that you never finished it still exists. 🤔 But I'll read on and find out [RAFO]. 5/5