i did like the start so far to this story. It is very interesting and has captured my attention. The only thing i can honestly say, is to make the next chapter longer, please. :)
I hope the next chapter is on its way but, I also hope you haven't given up on Daemon. Either way a new chapter of whichever would be enjoyed. :-)
TC, LF
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Anonymous05/05/09
great start
Really looking forward to the rest of the story. Hope that the next chapter is up soon.
good start
i did like the start so far to this story. It is very interesting and has captured my attention. The only thing i can honestly say, is to make the next chapter longer, please. :)
i like the new story!
I hope the next chapter is on its way but, I also hope you haven't given up on Daemon. Either way a new chapter of whichever would be enjoyed. :-)
TC, LF
great start
Really looking forward to the rest of the story. Hope that the next chapter is up soon.
next?
wat happens next???
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