All Comments on 'Intergalactic Courtesan Ch. 02'

I like the flow of your story. Good transition points between pts 1 and 2.

Keep up the good work! Desiree as a character is fleshing out nicely.

I'm really enjoying this submission; I can't wait to see what happens next so please update soon :)

It is starting out a bit slow, but still it is a good story and the buildup of the characters is always a good way to start.

I just found your story and found that this is a different take on any other story that I have read in a long time.

Hoping to read the full series and looking forward too enjoying more of this story. Keep up the good work.