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One good little tale!
I usually enjoy your submissions, but I think this is one of your best yet. Thanks for what you do.
Wonderful!
I love O'Henry endings! This is a very good read!
Nicely Told
Right up to your usual standards Dee. A nice tale of mature love with a clever twist at the conclusion. Well done.
Beautiful indeed!
Great story, Dee. You write about very lovable grandmothers.
I HAVE A RAKE TOO!
Nicely done, as usual. Just let me if Davie goes away to school or something and you need a substitute raker. Not sure if they'll let me bring my rake on the plane though!
very nice
Very nice job with this story. Got a variety of emotions going and a great finish. Looking to read more of your work.
wow ...
for some reason this got to me, it's a gusher story, if you know what I mean. I don't want to be too crude in directness, but thanks so much ...
kitschshaman
Sheila
Wonderful story. Your discription of Sheila was enticing. The thought of making love to grandmother is a turn on. Because of my mother, I love older women. Thank you.
exciting story
There is nothing great then satisfying
A old hot n xxi lady
Keep it up and write more.
Im really impressed.
I like old women more xxi
and inviting
keeping writing
I`enjoy your stories and if your anything like your characters, any young man would treasure your mature beauty and pleasures. Keep writing you fine mature beauty!
GOOD BUT
YOU NEED TO MAKE IT MORE SENSUAL AND EROTIC. MORE ON HOW IT FEELS FOR THEM LIKE HOE DEEP HE IS AND PLACES HE OR SHE EXCITES.
Sheila
I really enjoyed this story. I love a woman with a hairy Peach.
Sheila
Great lady that Sheila,she will never go without a fuck,there will always be leaves to clear up,lucky grandson.
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