by surober1
And you're right your characters are beyond totally boring. Besides this thing has gone on too long anyways.
If the story totally bored you to death, then WHY did you keep reading and then feel it necessary to make such a comment? You're obviously a person who gets their "jollies" out of making snide comments about other people's efforts. I have read A LOT of the stories on this site and some of them are simply HORRID but I do not feel the need to say so to the authors. If ASKED I would give an honest criticism without being RUDE. And if you are not a writer yourself, then you are a COWARD for making a comment like this anonymously.